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*{{xt|Armed with two 6 in (152 mm) guns, on commissioning, the cruiser was the flagship and largest vessel in the Peruvian fleet. In 1901, the armament was upgraded.}} awkward |
*{{xt|Armed with two 6 in (152 mm) guns, on commissioning, the cruiser was the flagship and largest vessel in the Peruvian fleet. In 1901, the armament was upgraded.}} awkward |
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*Link Ecuador |
*Link Ecuador |
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*Does the ship have any kind of armor? If not, then she's an [[unprotected cruiser]]. |
*Does the ship have any kind of armor? If not, then she's an [[unprotected cruiser]]. |
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**The sources have no detail about armor. Updated the links. |
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*Fix the draught figure in the main body; the figures for length and beam don't match between the infobox and main body |
*Fix the draught figure in the main body; the figures for length and beam don't match between the infobox and main body |
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**Fixed and referenced. |
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*Any idea why such a lengthy amount of time between completion and service entry?--[[User:Sturmvogel 66|Sturmvogel 66]] ([[User talk:Sturmvogel 66|talk]]) 08:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC) |
*Any idea why such a lengthy amount of time between completion and service entry?--[[User:Sturmvogel 66|Sturmvogel 66]] ([[User talk:Sturmvogel 66|talk]]) 08:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC) |
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**Added a bit of explanation. |
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{{ping|Sturmvogel 66}} Thank you for this review. Please take a look at my edits and tell me if there is anything else. [[User talk:simongraham|simongraham]] ([[User talk:simongraham|talk]]) 15:12, 27 September 2024 (UTC) |
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Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 01:24, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:51, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:51, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I look forward to your comments. simongraham (talk) 04:50, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
- Image properly licensed
- Armed with two 6 in (152 mm) guns, on commissioning, the cruiser was the flagship and largest vessel in the Peruvian fleet. In 1901, the armament was upgraded. awkward
- Reworded.
- Link Ecuador
- Added.
- Does the ship have any kind of armor? If not, then she's an unprotected cruiser.
- The sources have no detail about armor. Updated the links.
- Fix the draught figure in the main body; the figures for length and beam don't match between the infobox and main body
- Fixed and referenced.
- Any idea why such a lengthy amount of time between completion and service entry?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- Added a bit of explanation.
@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. Please take a look at my edits and tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 15:12, 27 September 2024 (UTC)