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:@[[User:ZhaoFJx|ZhaoFJx]] I will add here that the student is translating article from English Wikipedia, so it should not be triggering copypaste/copyvio warnings? <sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Hanyangprofessor2|Piotrus at Hanyang]]&#124;[[User talk:Hanyangprofessor2|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 07:56, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
:@[[User:ZhaoFJx|ZhaoFJx]] I will add here that the student is translating article from English Wikipedia, so it should not be triggering copypaste/copyvio warnings? <sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Hanyangprofessor2|Piotrus at Hanyang]]&#124;[[User talk:Hanyangprofessor2|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 07:56, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
::OK, Professor. I have also noticed the message from the administrator. I will revise the question carefully. [[User:YZY2233|YZY2233]] ([[User talk:YZY2233|talk]]) 10:17, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
::OK, Professor. I have also noticed the message from the administrator. I will revise the question carefully. [[User:YZY2233|YZY2233]] ([[User talk:YZY2233|talk]]) 10:17, 7 October 2024 (UTC)
::Got it. Seems like some Chinese external websites used enwiki texts in their content, so the Future article is similar to other external websites. Thus, as long as it is from enwiki orginlly, the article should be fine. <span style="font-family:Georgia;">Sincerely [[User:ZhaoFJx|<span style="color:#000;">'''ZhaoFJx'''</span>]]<sub>([[User Talk:ZhaoFJx|<span style="color:#000;">T</span>]])</sub></span> 23:22, 7 October 2024 (UTC)


== Deadline4:ZHANG XIAOTONG ==
== Deadline4:ZHANG XIAOTONG ==

Revision as of 23:22, 7 October 2024

Deadline 2 :LIUYUNXIANG & HUANGLINGXUAN

Dear Professor, I am LIU YUNXIANG . I am taking of your lecture: Media Trends and Globalization.

Me and my group members @Hhhlx . Two articles have been selected for editing: this is the article translated from Chinese to English article, and this is the article translated from English to Chinese article. Please check it. Thank you! 1eleven0086 (talk) 07:17, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@1eleven0086 @Hhhlx The first topic is approved. The second topic is not linked correctly - please fix your link and then I can check it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:07, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Im so sorry about that, here is our English to Chinese article https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/中国和平崛起 1eleven0086 (talk) 11:59, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@1eleven0086 Since you have two people, and for your first, approved, topic you chose to translate Gender inequality in North Korea from English into Chinese, for the second topic you need to choose something that has a much better Chinese article then English (since you need to translate good content from zh wiki to en wiki). zh:中国和平崛起 does not appear to be such an article. Please chose another topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:53, 18 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor How about this article?Freedom of speech can we translate this from English to Chinese? 1eleven0086 (talk) 02:00, 19 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@1eleven0086 Since you are a group, you need to find a topic to translate from Chinese to English, not English to Chinese. You already have one English to Chinese project approved (gender inequality in NK). Each group needs to translate one article from en to zh, and one from zh to en. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:11, 19 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Professor can we translate this from Chinese to English? https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/漢字史 thank you. 1eleven0086 (talk) 13:10, 22 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@1eleven0086 The topic is good but the execution is bad. You can translate it but remember that only referenced content is accepted on English Wikipedia, and most of the Chinese article is unreferenced, as indicated by the article itself (see the orange warning template at the top). So yes, you can translate it, but first you will need to add references to the Chinese article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:10, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor we chose new article for this class from Chinese to English https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/生活在树上 please check, thank you, 1eleven0086 (talk) 09:48, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@1eleven0086 Good, topic approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:29, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1:Wang Tao

Dear Professor.

I am taking one of my professor's courses - “Media Trends and Globalization”.

1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it out Thanks!

2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. here is my link, please check it out thanks.

Wangtao626 (talk) 12:28, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wangtao626 Good job! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:26, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
User:Wangtao626 Professor, I decorated my UI, please check it out Wangtao626 (talk) 18:26, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Wangtao626 Very good, extra credit will be awarded :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:11, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 : 白诗棋 & Aaiiuuu

Dear Professor I have selected this article (* Film censorship Korean is needed/Chinese needs expansion zh:电影审查制度)to translate from Chinese to English.

My group members and I chose this topic and translated it from English to Chinese. [Tattooing in China Korean is needed/Chinese still needed]

Please check it out! Thank you! 12:00, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply] 白诗棋 (talk) 05:12, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@白诗棋 First, you need to talk to me after class and sign our spreadsheet, I don't have your username recorded there so I do not who you are.
Second, the topics of translating film censorship to Chinese was already completed last semester by another group; of course there is no point in translating it the other direction. Likewise, tattoing in China was translated as well. Please stop by my office on Monday and tell me your new topics or I will help you select good articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:58, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor,
I registered the name BAI SHIQI because I couldn't type Chinese , but the real username is 白诗棋. Could you change it for me,please? My group member and I chose this topic and translated it from English to Chinese. Global financial system. We have selected this article to translate have selected this article translate from Chinese to English. 社会学史 白诗棋 (talk) 04:25, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
We will change 纽约时报 Chinese to English. Professor, please take a look. 白诗棋 (talk) 05:41, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@白诗棋 I fixed your name. Global financial system is approved, but you need to find a topic to translate from Chinese to English. The New York Times obviously has a better article in English than in Chinese - but if you are interested in media, look at the pages of Chinese newspapers. I expect many have not very good articles in English, or no articles at all. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:13, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor,
If I use this article to translate it from Chinese to English, 对百度的争议is it possible? 白诗棋 (talk) 01:40, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@白诗棋 That article was chosen by another student. How about zh:Bilibili相关争议 instead? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:13, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
All right, professor. 白诗棋 (talk) 04:08, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2: XU YAN

Dear Professor:

I am taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

This is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese:Economic inequality in South Korea

Please check Thank you ! Xuan6699 (talk) 07:01, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xuan6699 The topic is approved. I assume you are working by yourself? If so, you still need to select another topic to translate from English to Chinese. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:02, 20 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, professor, I want to re-select the subject.
This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English:幸福到万家
And I chose to translate (Asian pride) from English to Chinese as a bonus to get extra points
Please check Thank you ! Xuan6699 (talk) 12:28, 22 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Xuan6699 幸福到万家 has very little content. In order for this to be accepted on English Wikipedia, you will have to add a section about reception, which discusses reviews of this show in reliable sources (newspapers and such).
Translation of Asian pride to zh accepted. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:16, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, Professor. Can I change the article I translated from Chinese to English to The Silent Truth? Xuan6699 (talk) 07:26, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Xuan6699 Yes. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:15, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 : Yoon daeun & Jeong seolah

Dear Professor:

I am taking a course, "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".

Me and my group members @Jeong seolah

We have selected the Wikipedia article to expand from English to Korean.

We plan to create 'Hyehwas travel guide for main porject.

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Seoul/Jongno

Dear student(s). Please do not delete older messages. Please do not edit older messages changing their content. Please ensure your posts are signed. Please talk to me in about your project during my office hours. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:18, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear professor:
I'm sorry to delete older mhaessages.
We changed our article and country of main project.
We plan to create 'Yecheon' travel guide for main porject.
We have selected the wikivoyage article about Andong.
Because Andong is Gyeongsangbuk-do area like Yecheon.
Therefore we think it is an article related to the main project topic.
https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Andong Ydaeun0306 (talk) 05:34, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Ydaeun0306 Right now I have your project as Yecheon.
Or do you wish it to be https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Andong ? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:35, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
We want to select our project as Yecheon.
However, Yecheon's article is too short(Yecheon County)
so we can get more information from this https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Andong Ydaeun0306 (talk) 16:44, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Ydaeun0306 I see. Yes, you can change your primary topic to Andong. You can edit Yecheon for extra credit. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:23, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2-LIU XINRUI

Dear Professor:

I am studying a course called“Understanding Small and Big Data through Wikis”.

I want to complete the expansion of Xishuangbanna (Dai Autonomous Prefecture) independently.

Please check it,thank you! 유신예 (talk) 09:16, 22 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 This may be fine, but please stop by my office or talk to me after class, as you need to add your name to our speadsheet. Otherwise I cannot record your choice and award you points Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:55, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
PS. Improvign priovince articles is difficult. I recommend choosing a town, like :wv:Mohan Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:56, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor: Thank you for your reply!I listened to your suggestion and chose another city in Yunnan as my extended task. Here is the link. Please check it, thank you. 유신예 (talk) 10:36, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@유신예 I am afraid Pu'er has been reserved by another group. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:29, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I re-selected a city in Henan Province, China, as my extended article. This is the link.Sorry to trouble you. Please check it again.thank you! 유신예 (talk) 17:43, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@유신예 Anyang is good, approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:35, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2- Dabin Kim, Eunyeong Kang

Dear Professor:

We are taking "Media Trends and Globalization" with @Kang eunyeong

1. This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abortion_in_Japan

2. This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Opera_in_South_Korea

Thank you! Dbinni (talk) 13:54, 22 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Dbinni The topics are fine for one person, but if you are working in a group, you need to choose one topic to translate from English to Korean, and one to translate from Korean to English. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 09:58, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your reply. Then,
1. This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abortion_in_Japan
2. This is the link to the article translated from Korean to English:[[1]] Dbinni (talk) 10:57, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Dbinni Good, but 정재권 is rather short. You may need to translate another similar article to reach the required word count. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:31, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Professor, I'm sorry for the inconvenience, but can I change the article to be translated from Korean to English to 권진규? Dbinni (talk) 12:13, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Dbinni The subject is good but that article is missing footnotes. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Korean article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:38, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2: Dabin Kim

Dear Professor:

I am taking "Understanding Small Data and Big Data" from the professor.

I want to choosehttps://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Suwon

to expand for main project individually. Is it possible? Dbinni (talk) 14:52, 22 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Dbinni That page is already pretty well developed. Please choose a topic that is not developed or does not exist on Wikivoyage yet. How about wikivoyage:Pyeongtaek ? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 10:02, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your recommendation. Then, I’ll choose Pyeongtaek Dbinni (talk) 10:28, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:31, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2: Jung Jaeyun

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

1. This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean: Criticism_of_democracy (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Criticism_of_democracy)

2.This is the link to the article translated from English to Korean:Dependency theory (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dependency_theory) Jaeyun01 (talk) 04:22, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaeyun01 Dear students. Please remember to add your new messages at the bottom of this page, not in the middle (unless you are continuing a previous discussion and replying to my comment). Your topics are approved and recorded. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:29, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:SHU YING

Dear Professor:

I am taking the course "Media Trends and Globalization" .

I have completed deadline 3 of "Media Trends and Globalization",and I've done the citation work in this page[2]

Please check it. Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 06:57, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Syouziiye To complete this assignment, you should add a citation to the article in public space, not to your sandbox. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 10:22, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry for the mistake.I have corrected the assignment of deadline3, please check. [3] Syouziiye (talk) 14:37, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Syouziiye Well done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:32, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 : ZHONG QI and SHAO TIANYI

Dear Professor: I am talking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki"with my group members @Yeomll

1. We will select this Wikipedia article to expand and translate them: [[4]]

2.This is the article I chose for the second class: https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/%E6%B5%8E%E5%AE%81

Please check it out!Thank you ! —Kylo09 (talk) 14:00, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kylo09 Good. Please work on your superstition article in your sandbox for now (see Help:Sandbox tutorial
Regarding the Wikivoyage assignment, remember that it needs to be completed in English, not Chinese. That means you should be expanding this: wikivoyage:Jining_(Shandong) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:38, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 :XUE DONGXIN

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Uzi (gamer).

Please check it. Thank you. Donghem (talk) 15:38, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Donghem Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:40, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 : YUE ZIYI

Dear Professor

I have completed deadline 3 of "Media Trends and Globalization". I've done the citation work in Future(zh)

Thank you for your checking. YZY2233 (talk) 04:27, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Good, but for deadline 3 you need to add a citation to an article that is not your main project. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:41, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry for the mistake.I have corrected the assignment of deadline3 [5], please check. YZY2233 (talk) 10:23, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@YZY2233 You have added content and then deleted it, so I am not seeing the competed assignment? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:40, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK professor, I re-did it and added reference to Shaxian delicacies, please check it YZY2233 (talk) 08:20, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@YZY2233 Now it is well done. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:24, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

CHEN HEBING

Hello professor, I am CHEN HEBING who attended your class 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' yesterday. After class yesterday afternoon, I showed you an article called Shangrao in Wikivoyage that I had modified myself. The content and article skeleton were all newly created by me during class yesterday, and the historical records only show the content that I modified. However, the student in front of me yesterday found this article and used the theme for himself. Is this inappropriate? CHEN HEBING (talk) 04:42, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHEN HEBING I am not sure what you are asking. But since you have not chosen your project for this class, how about you and that student work together to improve this article? This assignment can be done by a group of two. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your response, but this is a new article I created myself. Someone saw it during class and set it as their own topic. This is plagiarism. CHEN HEBING (talk) 05:26, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@CHEN HEBING Right. I don't see a problem with that? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:40, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3.WEN JIAYAO

Dear professor, I chose this article and added some references. There are some characters on Baidu but no specific references have been found. Is this okay? Is there anything else that needs to be modified?About diff, I read the tutorial, but I don't know where to find oldid.1908 in China Wjyy1212 (talk) 10:49, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wjyy1212 Good job. The diff looks like this: 1908 in China: Difference between revisions - Wikipedia
You can read more at WP:DIFF or ask me for demonstration on how to get it in class or during my office hours. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:43, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2:TANG YINI

Dear Professor

I am talking two courses, For this class "Media Trends and Globalization," I selected the theme of translating "Anarchism in Korea" into Chinese.For this course on Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis, I chose to expand on the topic of "Hanzhong."

Thank you for your checking.

Tyuni06 (talk) 10:57, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Professor
This is another topic need to translate.Anarchism in Poland.
Thank you for your checking。 Tyuni06 (talk) 04:30, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Tyuni06 Good, topics approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:44, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:TANG YINI

Dear Professor

I am talking two courses,For this class "Media Trends and Globalization" ,I translated my choice of "Anarchism in Korea” .For this course on Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis,I expanded on the theme of Hanzhong

Thank you for your checking. Tyuni06 (talk) 11:11, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3: XU YAN

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

I made one additional edit outside of the sandbox and added content and reference to the article about 幸福到万家.

Please check. Thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 12:27, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xuan6699 Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:44, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:gaoxiaoxia

Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Media Trends and Globalization". I add citation in [6] Please check.Thank you Babaibiaobin (talk) 16:34, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Babaibiaobin That content already had a reference. Please try to add a reference to content that is missing it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:45, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I add a reference to content that is missing it Babaibiaobin (talk) 06:08, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Babaibiaobin Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:37, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:LIU ZIFU

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about 佛得角签证

I added citations and some summaries for Cape Verdean visas. I found a summary of this visa on the website of our Ministry of Foreign Affairs and uploaded it on it.

Please check it. Thank you. Peter011008 (talk) 00:30, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Peter011008 Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:46, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline1: ZHANG QI

Dear Professor:

I am a student named ZHANG QI. I am taking two courses, “Media Trends and Globalization“ and ”Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki.”

1. I have completed the Wikipedia Training. Here is my link.

2. I have enrolled in the dashboard system for those two courses. Here is my link.

Please check it out. Thank you. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 00:47, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:46, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2:ZHANG QI

Dear Professor:

I am ZHANG QI taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis class.

I want to translate this article form chinese to english 潍县战役.

And my teammate is LIU ZIFU. He has your consent offline, please add me to the second group.His translations its that.

ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 00:56, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Very good, topics and group approved. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:48, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 : Jeong Aram

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Data"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Minorities in South Korea[[7]]

Thank you for checking Jeong Ahram (talk) 06:07, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeong Ahram Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:41, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3: CAI ZHIHANG

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I completed the sandbox editing and added the reference.Here is the link

Please check. Thanks. Caizzz (talk) 12:16, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Caizzz Good start, but that assignment shoudl be done outside the sandbox. Sandbox is for your own practice. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:42, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Here is the new link I marked the frosting https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%A4%B0%E5%AD%90%E8%9B%8B%E7%B3%95 Caizzz (talk) 04:15, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Caizzz Wikipedia cannot be used as a reference for itself. Please add a reference that is realiable (read: Wikipedia:Reliable sources) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:03, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is the new link :https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%A4%B0%E5%AD%90%E8%9B%8B%E7%B3%95#cite_note-5 Caizzz (talk) 05:30, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Caizzz You repeated the same error. Please read what I wrote, as well as WP:SPS Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:40, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is my new link
Note 23 Reference to Dragon Boat Race Caizzz (talk) 06:31, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Caizzz Please note that your edit was reverted (rejected) by reviewing editors, because you used a low quality source (see Wikipedia:BAIDU). As Baidu has too many errors, it is not allowed to be a source on Wikipedia. Please try again, this time with a reliable source. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:31, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is my new link
Note 23 Reference to Dragon Boat Race Caizzz (talk) 11:11, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:ZHANG XIAOTONG

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Data".

I made one additional edit outside of the sandbox and added content and reference.Here is the link

Please check it. Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 13:05, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hyodong318 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:43, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dreadline1:QU HONGYU

Dear Professor: I am learning one courses from professors on media trends.1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my https://imgur.com/a/kwcnjAA, please check it out Thanks! 2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. Here is my https://imgur.com/a/ljFpr2R ,please check it out Thanks! Pineappleq (talk) 16:47, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Pineappleq Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:44, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:Ma chenxiao

Dear Professor, I added a citation to the assignment for this class (Media Trends and Globalization). Here is the link Li Jun (Water Margin) Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 00:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:44, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:LYU YANGCHENG

https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?action=edit&title=1938_Changsha_fire&venoscript=1 Hello teacher, is that okay? Hanyangdaxue (talk) 03:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangdaxue Unfortunately, no. Please watch the LMS video on adding references, or revisit the part about adding references in the training tutorial. Or check how your friends have completed this assignment. Or ask me how to do so during the office hours. What you have done is to add an external link, not a reference (and Wikipedia does not include external links in article body, see Wikipedia:External links). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:47, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2: QU HONGYU& LIN AIJIA

Dear Professor, I am QU HONGYU. I am taking of your lecture: Media Trends and Globalization.

Me and my group members @Linlin406. Two articles have been selected for editing: this is the article translated from Chinese to English article, and this is the article translated from English to Chinese article. Please check it. Thank you~ Pineappleq (talk) 04:37, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Pineappleq The en to zh topic (Derrick Rose) is fine, but the other topic is not better in zh then on (世界旅游日) and you need to choose another topic.
Also, @Linlin406 needs to sign our student spreadsheet, as I do not have their name or username recorded. Please stop by my office hours do fix that. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor, I am QU HONGYU. I am taking of your lecture: Media Trends and Globalization.
Me and my group members @Linlin406. Two articles have been selected for editing: this is the article translated from Chinese to English article, and this is the article translated from English to Chinese article. Please check it. Thank you~ 124.52.58.231 (talk) 15:01, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Pineappleq 2014 Mount Ontake eruption is already covered sufficiently on zh wiki, and I have already approved your proposal to translate Derrick Rose, so I don't see the need to change.
Translating of World Tourism Day from Chinese to English is pointless, as it is already better in English than Chinese, so this is denied. If you cannot choose a topic by yourself, please stop by my office hours. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:39, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor, I've changed the content, please check it outTwo articles have been selected for editing: this is the article translated from Chinese to English article, and this is the article translated from English to Chinese article. Please check it. Thank you~ 218.235.241.135 (talk) 04:10, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Again, 沈腾 looks no better in zh then in en. Please stop by my office and we will discuss some ideas for you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:05, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 : HAN YUANYUAN

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Data"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about fish cakes.

Please check it. Thank you. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:52, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 First, please remember to log in before making edits. I assume this was your edit. Note that it was rejected by another editor as your first reference was to an unreliable source (Namuwiki is a low-quality source with many errors), while your last reference was added to an already referenced content. Your middle reference to BBC might have been fine - I'll ping @Barry Wom to hear their rationale for removing it as well. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I removed the link to the BBC recipe because it refers to a British version of the dish, and the "Composition" section into which it was inserted has been tagged as not providing a sufficiently worldwide view. Barry Wom (talk) 14:32, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I re-made an article outside the sandbox, please check, thanks.[8] Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 14:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hanyuanyuan613 The assignment requires adding a citation to an unreferenced content. You have added a citation to a content that was already referenced. Please try again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:40, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Good afternoon professor, I re-selected an article outside the sandbox and added a reference, please check.[9] Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 06:30, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hanyuanyuan613 ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:41, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:HONG HAOTIAN

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Chan Ho Park

Please check.Thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 05:13, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Honghaotian Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:LI MENGCHEN

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Moon Tae-jong (Basketball)

Please check. Thank you. Limengchen2777 (talk) 05:14, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Limengchen2777 Unfortunately, your edit was reverted. You added a malformatted heading, two unreferenced paragraphs, and the last paragraph had non-neutral language (wonderful performance), followed by a reference to low-quality source (see WP:BAIDU). Please try again, but first please read Wikipedia:Reliable sources and Wikipedia:Verifiability guides. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is new, please check.Hyun-jinRyu Limengchen2777 (talk) 07:10, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Limengchen2777 This is much better, but the first of your two paragraphs is unreferenced. A footnote (citation, reference) should follow each paragraph. Please add a footnote to the first paragraph. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:26, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is the latest change please check thank you! Hyun-jinRyu Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:22, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Limengchen2777 Good, now this is correct Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:06, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:ZHUANG MINNA

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about PUNING city

Please check. Thank you! Minazhuang777 (talk) 05:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Minazhuang777 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:57, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:ZHANG XIAORUI

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Datawith Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about South Korea national football team.

Please check it. Thank you. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 06:08, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zzzxxxrrr Please note your edit was reverted, as it was deemed to add unimportant information to a wrong section of the article. Please try again and make sure the content you add is relevant to the place it is being added to. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 13:59, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor: This is my latest change information about Article 20。 please check, thank you! Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 04:39, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Zzzxxxrrr This looks good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:07, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:LYU YANGCHENG

Canal Tours Hello teacher, I have added this canal tour Hanyangdaxue (talk) 06:08, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangdaxue I have reverted your edit, as the reference cited does not seem to support text added. Please note that adding false or misleading links as references can result in your account being blocked from Wikipedia, which will make it hard for you to complete our course. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 14:00, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Coffee cake (American) The teacher did it again, look at it, thank you. Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:39, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hanyangdaxue That content was already referenced. Please add a reference to a paragraph that is missing it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:42, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:XI JIAXIN

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Datawith Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Hwang Sun-woo Please check it. Thank you. Xjx921 (talk) 06:13, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xjx921 Good, I see you already corrected your error (wikis like Namuwiki with poor quality control cannot be used as sources on Wikipedia). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:55, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3: GUANYUE

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Siu Mei Please check it. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 06:48, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Uuueol Please use more reliable sources - Baidu is a low quality source, see WP:BAIDU Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:56, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear professor, I've added a reference to a new article, please check it again. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 06:10, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Uuueol Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:01, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:CUI ZAN

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about 烧烤

Please check. Thank you! Cuicuizan (talk) 06:49, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cuicuizan Please note that your edit was reverted for copying content without permission from other sources (@AlexLeeCN can add further comment, perhaps). Please be careful to avoid repeating such mistakes, or your account may be blocked, which will make it hard for you to complete assignments for our classes. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:58, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
dear professor,I'm very sorry for this mistake, is it okay if I change it to this?烧烤 Cuicuizan (talk) 05:04, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Cuicuizan The reference is ok. Make sure your content is reworded in the future (not directly copied). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:05, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:WU WENHAO

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Park Min-young.

Please check. Thank you Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 06:49, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wuwenhao19960507 Good. See how a more experienced user (@Paper9oll) improved on your edit, including removing duplicated text - please be more careful with your edits in the future Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:00, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'm so sorry, I just checked the link and found such a serious error. I will definitely check again after editing next time. Wuwenhao19960507 (talk) 08:33, 1 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3: QIAN ZIYI

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Small and Big Datawith Wikis" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Janie (2006 film) Please check it. Thank you. Buryab0ne (talk) 06:50, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Buryab0ne I've reverted your edits, as the sources you added don't mention the movie Janie. In one case you also removed the date of the award. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:02, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 : Jung Jaeyun

Dear Professor:

Hello. I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [10]

Thank you.Jaeyun01 (talk) 06:55, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jaeyun01 Good, but note that content in WP:LEAD does not require references, if they are provided in the body of the article. Leads are just abstracts, summaries, and references usually are not added to them. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:05, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2:ZHANG MINGSHUO

Dear Professor:

I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".

This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English:铠甲勇士

This is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese:Gozo Stadium

Thank you Shuo1103 (talk) 09:47, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 While the topic of 铠甲勇士 is interesting, the underlying zh wiki article is very bad, as seen from multiple warning messages at the top. If you want to translate it, you will need to start by referencing all facts (right now the zh wiki article has no references, and they are required both by our class policies - see syllabi - as well as Wikipedia:Verifiability policy), and by adding a section in awards and reception (reviews).
Gozo Stadium is fine, and I will approve this for you. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:44, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English:包头战役
Can we change it to this one
Thank you Shuo1103 (talk) 11:51, 1 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Shuo1103 Yes, this is a good topic, approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:44, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
PS. Are you working in a group or by yourself? If in a group, who is your groupmate? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:45, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2:ZHOU HAIRUO

Dear Professor:

I am taking Meadia Trends and Globalization from a professor.

This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English:https://w.wiki/59Kt

This is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anime_and_manga_fandom

Please check.Thank you. Waterooo (talk) 16:29, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Waterooo Both of those topics have already been reserved by another student(s), so you will need to choose a different ones. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:48, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:WU SHUHAN

Dear Professor: Hello. I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about Song Jia Thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 10:45, 28 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WSH0927 Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:56, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:SHENZIHE

Dear Professor:

Hello. I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about JinChengHua Thank you. SHENZIHE (talk) 02:55, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@SHENZIHE I am afraid I cannot locate your edit in that article. Please show it to me during my office hours or try again. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:56, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I changed it again. Maybe that's okay?JinChengHua SHENZIHE (talk) 05:05, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@SHENZIHE You have added a category, which is fine for an extra credit, for the activity, please show me your edit where you add a reference. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:07, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3: ZHONG QI

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [11]&[12]

Please check. Thank you! —Kylo09 (talk) 07:48, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kylo09 Ok! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:57, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3: TANG YINI

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox.Here are all the links 1.Anarchism in Korea2.Anarchism in Poland3.HanZhong

Thank you for your checking. Tyuni06 (talk) 08:33, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Tyuni06 I see. This is a good stgart, but please see the warning messages added at the top of your articles in Chinese. You need to address those issues quickly, or your work may be deleted. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:58, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 : Dabin Kim

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [13]

Please check it. Thank you.Dbinni (talk) 09:28, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Dbinni I have reverted your edits as the content was difficult to understand with many grammatical errors. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:02, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've added another reference to the same article. please check it. [14] Dbinni (talk) 05:45, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Dbinni Now this is ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:43, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Blog:gaoxiaoxia

Hello Professor I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"This is my blogging assignment 1 Babaibiaobin (talk) 12:09, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Babaibiaobin Ok. Blogging does not need to be reported until the finals week; good job. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:44, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 : LAOXINYI

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" I've added a reference to an article about it:https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Huang_Xiaoming&action=history Please check it. Thank you!Laoxinyi (talk) 13:29, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Laoxinyi Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:45, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Deadline3:SHAO TIANYI

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [15] Please check. Thank you! ——Yeomll (talk) 14:15, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yeomll Good, but one of your footnotes is incorrectly added to the bottom of the article - please fix that small error. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:45, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 : Lee Jae-Hyun

Hello, professor. I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis". I want you to review about my article.

According to syllabus of 'Understanding small and Big Data with Wikis', the content of Deadline 3 is 'Showing my draft'. I'm not sure if that's the same as saying of "I'm going to review my particles.". But I'm posting what I've edited because you told at Deadline 3 "Please inform me through the Wikipedia system by leaving me a message on my talk page at User_talk: Hanyangproposer2 that your particles are ready for review."

Nonsan - Travel guide at Wikivoyage Here is my article. I've really added a lot of details over the past week. Please give me a feedback about my article. Thanks for your lecture, professor. Sincerely.JHyunlee (talk) 14:21, 29 September 2024 (UTC)JHyunlee (talk) 14:22, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JHyunlee Yes, as we discussed in class, you are doing fine. Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:46, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3: Soeun Kwon

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization".

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about.

This is the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Gangwon_Province,_South_Korea&action=history

Please check it. Thank you! SoeunK (talk) 15:04, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SoeunK Good, but your reference is just a link (see Wikipedia:Bare URLs). Please edit it and add title, date, publisher, author, and other such details. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:11, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I added details. Please check it. SoeunK (talk) 07:07, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2:ZAIWEI&WANGTAO

Dear Professor: I am taking one course "Media Trends and Globalization" Me and my group members @WANGTAO his is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese. This is the link to the article translated from Chinese to English. Please check Thank you ! ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 15:40, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZAIWEI0328@WANGTAO Please stop by my office hours as you did not sign the spreadsheet and I cannot record your choice.
World Values Survey is accepted for translation to Chinese.
Your other topic looks good too. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:15, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:白诗棋

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [弗拉·蒙雷亚莱][叶临之]Please check. Thank you! 白诗棋 (talk) 02:33, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@白诗棋 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:16, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3 : Lee jisu

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about [4]

Thank you. Xisuux (talk) 04:09, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xisuux Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:17, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 : Kim Kyungmin

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

Among the Deadline 4 tasks, I'm attaching the translation from my sandbox. Please check.

[16]

Thank you. Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 04:15, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kkm.hanyang22 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:17, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:LIU YUNXIANG

Dear Professor I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about 唐朝 - Wikipedia Thank you 1eleven0086 (talk) 04:46, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@1eleven0086 I cannot locate your edit there. Please show it to me during my office hours or link here using the WP:DIFF method Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:18, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear Professor I've added a reference to an article 郴州市 - Wikipedia please check! 1eleven0086 (talk) 06:20, 1 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@1eleven0086 Ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:51, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2 : Yoon Hee Jung

Dear Professor:

I am taking "Understanding Small Data and Big Data" from the professor.

I want to choose https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Danyang to expand for main project individually. Is it possible? Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 05:35, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hee Jung, Yoon As discussed, yes, it's ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:19, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:LYU YANGCHENG

Coffee cake (American) The teacher did it again, look at it, thank you. Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:37, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangdaxue As I replied above, this is incorrect. Please watch our LMS video on adding references and do it again Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:19, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?action=edit&title=Cairo_Conference&venoscript=1 Teacher, take a look. Hanyangdaxue (talk) 07:37, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hanyangdaxue That's better Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:06, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2:SHENZIHE

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki". 1. This is the link to the article translated from English to Chinese: 「Korean rock」「Climate change in North Korea

2.Also, i chose JinCheng to complete its expansion on Wikivoyage .

Please check Thank you ! SHENZIHE (talk) 05:43, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SHENZIHE As discussed, yes, it's ok Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:20, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:Hyeonmin Song

Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' from the professor. This is my draft this article(Yangju).

I'll try to update it continuously. Thank you for your checking.--SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 05:48, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:22, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 : Kim Jong min, Kang Taeho

@Kang Taeho

Dear Professor We have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' from the professor.

This is our draft Pocheon

I'll try to update it continuously. Thank you for your checking. Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 05:54, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:22, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 : Kang Taeho

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task. I've done some exercises to add a Director's experience to the sandbox User:Kang Taeho/sandbox and I've also inserted that into the actual Wikipedia.Lee Jung-hyo Please check. Kang Taeho (talk) 06:35, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kang Taeho Good, but that article is missing footnotes. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Korean article that has no references needs to be referenced; otherwise it may be removed from English Wikipedia. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:26, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 : Kim Jong min

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task. I've done some exercises to add a Director's experience to the sandbox User:Kim jong min (hanyang)/sandbox and I've also inserted that into the actual Wikipedia.Lee Jung-hyo Please check. Thank U :) Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 06:40, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Good, but see my comment above Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:26, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 : CHEN HEBING

Professor. Our group's @LJY2455 editing of SuqianSuqian has been completed this week. Please check it out。 CHEN HEBING (talk) 08:12, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHEN HEBING Well done Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:57, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Deadline 4:Hyeonmin Song

Dear Professor

I have completed deadline 4 of "Media Trends and Globalization" from the professor. I create an outline of my project in my personal sandbox.


Thank you for your checking.--SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 10:28, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:57, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:WANGYIZHE

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox.Here are all the links:1、https://en.m.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Menghai#Safety 2、https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WANGYIZHE1124

Please check it. Thank you WANGYIZHE1124 (talk) 15:18, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WANGYIZHE1124 Please review the changes made by experienced editors at Menghai: Revision history – Travel guide at Wikivoyage following your edits. What can you learn from them? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:58, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:WANG RUITONG

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"and "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about. This is the link:https://zh.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=馬洛尼山&oldid=84414121 Thank you for your checking.

DEar student, I don't see any references added in your edit at [17]. Also, please remember to WP:SIGN your wiki messages at talk. --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:00, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4:LIU ZIFU

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding small data and big data"Among the Deadline 4 task.

I've done some exercises to add a Director's experience to the sandbox .https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Peter011008/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92

Please check it. thank you

have a nice day Peter011008 (talk) 06:19, 1 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Peter011008 Good, please keep up your practice. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:01, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 : Jeongeun Park

Dear Professor:

First, I've completed deadline3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis." Wikivoyage: Seoul/North

Second, I've done deadline3 of "Media Trend and Globalization" as well. Wikipedia: World-systems theory

Check it out please. Thank you.

Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 20:13, 1 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please sign your posts properly - your username is @Parkjeongeun0430 not @Parkjeongeun430 . Please sign using the button, not manually
For deadline 3 for Globalization class, please add a reference to an unreferenced content, not as a general reference to a related article. Please find a sentence that has no reference and add a reference to it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:03, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I modified the sign and added another reference.
here is the link:
https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=World-systems_theory&action=history Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 05:42, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Parkjeongeun0430 Unfortunately, this is still not correct. You added an external link in the body (see Wikipedia:External links) and a footnote at the bottom of the article. Please watch our video in the LMS on how to add references, and/or check the Training for Students module on this, then try again. Or come see my in my office and I'll demonstrate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:13, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Professor, I modified deadline 3 of Media Trend and Globalization.
Here is the link:
https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=World-systems_theory&action=history Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 13:40, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4: SHU YING

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task, I've translated an article in Chinese and added references to my personal sandbox.

Please check. Syouziiye (talk) 05:16, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Syouziiye Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:04, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(Week5) BAILINHAN

Professor here are my 40 Wikipedia edits from last month please check.

This is the blog invitation I received but it seems not from Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis, is it correct please? I'll submit the sandbox draft separately before the deadline Thanks! Bai0926 (talk) 06:33, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 That is correct. Big and Small data has no obligatory blog. You can post any extra credit blogs for that class on that other blog. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:05, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3(Week5)- LIU XINRUI

Dear Professor: I'm taking your "UnderstandingSmall and Big Data with wikis " course. This is the first draft I completed. Please check if it is qualified. Or where improvements are needed.Thanks for your patience.Have a nice day! 2001:2D8:E206:B2E4:807E:8BCB:ED59:ED5C (talk) 08:30, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@유신예 Please remember to log in before making edits. Good job so far Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:35, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3: Parksungeun

Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' from the professor.

This is my draft Jecheon

Thank you for your checking. Parksungeun (talk) 16:11, 2 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Parksungeun Good progress! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:35, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3: Yoon Hee Jung

Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' from the professor.

This is my draft https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Danyang Thank you. Hee Jung, Yoon (talk) 12:28, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hee Jung, Yoon Topic is recorded and approved, good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:49, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:HAUNG YANHAN

Dear Professor, I added a citation to the assignment for this class (Media Trends and Globalization). Here is the link Xie Bao . HYH031277777 (talk) 13:51, 3 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:50, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4:SHENZIHE

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task, I've translated an article in Chinese and added references to my personal sandbox.

Please check. SHENZIHE (talk) 03:17, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SHENZIHE Good start Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:51, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:HAN YUANYUAN

Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' from the professor.

This is my draft Yuzhou.

Thank you for your checking. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:23, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:16, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2: JIHAIYUN

Dear Professor

I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".

Course 1 (Media Trends and Globalization):Themes:1. Multicultural families in South Korea(English translation into Chinese)2. Corruption in India (English translation into Chinese)

Course 2 (Learn about small data and big data through Wiki) :Themes:Ruili (Supplement the English Wikivoyage article.)

please check it out Thanks! Jihaiyun (talk) 04:39, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jihaiyun Recorded and approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:17, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 2:JIA YUAN

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki". The theme of "Media Trends and Globalization" is Asiacentrism. The theme of "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki" is Shangrao. Jiayyyyy (talk) 04:41, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiayyyyy Good, but remember to choose one more article to translate from English to Chinese in addition to Asiacentrism. How about Indocentrism ? It is a bit short but if you can add a short section on views of Indocentrism in Chinese literature, this should be fine. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:31, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK, professor. I'll add Indocentrism for my second article translation. Jiayyyyy (talk) 07:40, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline2:GUO YING

Dear Professor,

I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki".

on media trends and globalization, I will choose two English Wikipedia articles to translate into Chinese. The first theme is resource mobilization and the second is abortion in Poland. The two articles are linked below.

[18] [19]

Course 2 (Learn about small data and big data through Wiki) :Themes:Yangjiang(Supplement the English Wikivoyage article.)Yangjiang

please check it out Thanks!



Guoying1 (talk) 04:48, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Guoying1 Yes, topics approved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 04:32, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:JIA YUAN

Dear Professor: This is the subject of translating from "Media Trends and Globalization": Asiacentrism. This is the subject of expansion from "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki":shangrao. Jiayyyyy (talk) 05:13, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiayyyyy Good, but you should choose one more topic to translate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:33, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:FAN JINGYU

Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Media Trends and Globalization' from the professor.

This is my draft Lazaros Voreadis

Lesson 2: "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the topic: 滇南. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aaiiuuu (talkcontribs) 05:55, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your checking. Aaiiuuu (talk) 05:19, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Aaiiuuu I am afraid your reference was removed, as you have added a low quality reference as a source - see the explanation in the edit summary here. Please try again.
As for your linked Wikivoyage article, I do not see any edits by you at this page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:41, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3: JIHAIYUN

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis."

Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" This week I edited the topic: Multicultural families in Korea.

Lesson 2: "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the topic: Ruili.

Thank you for your checking. Jihaiyun (talk) 05:36, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jihaiyun @Laoxinyi Good. As you may be aware, your Chinese translation was moved to a draft space by Chinese Wikipedia administrators, as the current version was not good enough to make public. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:47, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello professor, this topic is a topic that I did alone, I did not form a group with others.I don't understand why it was moved to this classmate's draft sandbox.https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laoxinyi/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92_-_%E9%9F%A9%E5%9B%BD%E5%A4%9A%E5%85%83%E6%96%87%E5%8C%96%E5%AE%B6%E5%BA%ADLaoxinyi (talk) 11:07, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jihaiyun @Laoxinyi I see. It seems that there is an error in our assignment of articles, as both of you are listed in my spreadsheet as translating this article to Chinese . To keep it simple and easy, I recommend that the two of you work together on translating this as a group. I will allow it as an exception to the group projects that require each group to translate an article into English. Instead, you can just translate this one together and finish your second translation individually.
Otherwise one of you will have to reselect the topic. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:11, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hanyangprofessor2 @LaoxinyiOk, Professor, I have received your reply, and after discussion with this student, I have decided to form a group to complete the Chinese translation of this Wikipedia article about "Multicultural families in Korea". Please confirm. Jihaiyun (talk) 12:26, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3: GUOYING

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis." Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" This week I edited the topic: Resource mobilization.

Lesson 2: "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the topic: YangJiang.

Thank you for your checking. Guoying1 (talk) 05:48, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Guoying1 Good. Please note that the Chinese reviewers have tagged your translation as low quality. Please improve it - if errors are not fixed, your work may be deleted. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:53, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3 :CHEN SITING

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

I've done one extra edit outside of the sandbox, and I've added a reference to an article about https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Oona_A._Hathaway&action=history

Thank you! KellyChen0221 (talk) 05:57, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@KellyChen0221 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:56, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4:ZHANG XIAORUI

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and " "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis'

Among the Deadline 4 task, I've translated an article and added references to my sandbox.

Please check! Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 06:37, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zzzxxxrrr Good. Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
Also, please replace taiwan.huanqiu.com - that reference has been judged non-reliable - it cannot be trusted due to high volume of fake news and propaganda (see WP:GLOBALTIMES). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:58, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3: Yujin Jang

Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" from the professor.

This is my draft Hongseong at Wikivoyage for main project individually.

Please check, Thanks.Yujin0203 (talk) 07:00, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yujin0203 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:59, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:BAI LINHAN

Professor, I've finished the draft of the Family in South Korea, please check it out

Bai0926 (talk) 07:55, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Very good. Your article has a good structure, but you need to use better references. Please make sure all your references clearly state the author, date and publisher.
Your first reference is optilingo. What is this website? Who is the author? Why do you think we can trust that site, particulary in the context of the author's understanding of Korean culture?
Your second reference, culturalatlas, is fine, as it is associated with reliable platforms and the author is known (see About — Cultural Atlas (sbs.com.au)).
Your reference #3 is fine as well, as koreatimes is a reliable newspaper. But make sure to add author, date, and spell the newspaper name corretly (The Korea Times).
Your references 4 and 5 are good too.
Please add references to the first paragraph of the 'The rise of the nuclear family' and the ending of the first paragraph of the 'Changes in marriage and fertility', which currently do not have them.
Regarding "a modern family dynamic similar to that of the Australians has been adopted" - please rewrite it, as Australian family structure is not particularly unique or special. The source you are using is suffering from Australia-centrism.
To finish your paper, please read and use some academic sources like
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:14, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4: Soeun Kwon

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

Among the Deadline 4 tasks, I'm attaching the translation from my sandbox. Please check it.

SoeunK (talk) 08:05, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SoeunK Good start. Now please move your draft from English Wikipedia to Korean Wikipedia Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:19, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 : Kim Kyungmin

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

Among the Deadline 5 tasks, My article finished in my sandbox. I'm attaching the link, so please check

[20]

Thank you. Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 09:14, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kkm.hanyang22 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:26, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 1:HAN JIAYI

Dear Professor

1.I have complete the Wikipedia:Training Here is my link, please check it Thanks!

2.I have completed the wiki dashboard for registering to teach the course. here is my link , please check it thanks. Hnlyyyy (talk) 09:48, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hnlyyyy Good, now please catch up on other deadlines you have missed Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:26, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:YANG PEIFU

Hello Professor:

I edited He Delai and Ye HuochengNi Chiang-huai ‎ in and outside the User:Yangpeifu/sandbox2

I am still working on translating the templates in my sandbox), please check these links thanks! Yangpeifu (talk) 12:54, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yangpeifu Very nice, those should generate good amount of extra credit.
Please format your references so that they have English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:27, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4:YANG PEIFU

Hello Professor, I worked on a new topic about missing entries in template translations(like Ni Chiang-huai ‎ etc) in User:Yangpeifu/sandbox2. Yangpeifu (talk) 12:58, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4:Ma chenxiao

Dear Professor, I have completed the sandbox editing of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 06:11, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Good. Remember that all content added needs to have references (footnotes). Right now much of your draft is not referenced (it has no footnotes). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:29, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:Ma chenxiao

Dear Professor, I have finished editing the draft of Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. Please check it.Sanmenxia

But I couldn't find the sandbox page on Wikitravel, so I edited it directly on the official entry. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 06:20, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 It is ok to edit that page directly. Please review the history and see how experienced Wikivoyage editors are fixing your edits: Sanmenxia: Revision history – Travel guide at Wikivoyage Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:36, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

aboutProject 2 Ma chenxiao

Dear professor, regarding Project 2, we are a group of four people, the others are Han yuanyuan, Zhang qi, Chen hebing, my question is when we submit the assignment, do we need to write our four names in the PDF? Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 07:12, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Yes. In addition, everyone should submit the assignment (upload file(s)) themselves, to avoid problems due to incorrect spelling of one name in the pdf. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:37, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:ZHANG MINGSHUO

Dear professor

I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis." "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the topic:Hohhot Shuo1103 (talk) 07:35, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:37, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4:ZHANG MINGSHUO

Dear Professor

I have completed the sandbox editing of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it.thank you Shuo1103 (talk) 08:00, 5 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:38, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4:LYU YANGCHENG

Dear Professor, I have completed the sandbox editing of media trends globalization, English translation, please check it. Thank you teacher https://zh.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=User%3AHanyangdaxue%2F%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92&redlink=1&action=edit Hanyangdaxue (talk) 02:28, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangdaxue If you are translating from English to Chinese, you can reuse references from English article. You only need to find references for content that does not have references (footnote). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:41, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 : CHEN HEBING

Dear Professor, Our group is working on the Deadline 4 assignments "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data".

We have done some exercises to add to the sandbox. This is my English translation of the article Abortion in Japan, and this is my group@LJY2455 member's Chinese translation of the article Hong Kong media controversy

Please check. Thank you CHEN HEBING (talk) 10:55, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHEN HEBING @LJY2455 Those are good starts, but you need to add references (footnotes to reliable sources). Currently, both of your articles are missing footnotes. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being published. See Wikipedia:Verifiability for more information. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:33, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 : LAOXINYI

Dear Professor, I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization". I am working on two topics (English to Chinese) alone. I have already translated one of the topics, https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Laoxinyi/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92_-_%E9%9F%A9%E5%9B%BD%E5%A4%9A%E5%85%83%E6%96%87%E5%8C%96%E5%AE%B6%E5%BA%AD please check it. Thank you.Laoxinyi (talk) 11:15, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Laoxinyi It looks good. Per my previous comment I suggest you work together with another student to finish this - once you think the translation is done, you can publish your work by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:13, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hanyangprofessor2Ok, Professor, I have received your reply, and after discussion with this student, I have decided to form a group to complete the Chinese translation of this Wikipedia article about "Multicultural families in Korea". Please confirm. Laoxinyi (talk) 12:33, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3: LAOXINYI

I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis'.Among the Deadline 3 tasks, I have attached the content from my sandbox. Please check.thank you~~https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Laoxinyi/sandbox thank you!!Laoxinyi (talk) 11:23, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Laoxinyi Please add some properly formatted listings, as well as the introduction paragraph, then publish your article in the mainspace by moving it or copying the content to a new article, correctly named. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for the professor's advice. I will make modifications according to the professor's advice and then publish the article in the main space. Thank you~~!Laoxinyi (talk) 09:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3: WANGRUITONG

Dear Professor: I am taking two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis." Me and my group members LINYUYANG@l01yy11 Lesson 1: "Media Trends and Globalization" This week I edited the link: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%80%A7%E5%88%AB%E8%96%AA%E9%85%AC%E5%B7%AE%E8%B7%9D?wprov=sfti1# Lesson 2: "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis" This week I have added content to the topic: https://zh.wikivoyage.org/wiki/%E8%8D%94%E6%B3%A2

User:WANGRUITONG: Good, but please remember to WP:SIGN your posts. Also, I cannot see your edits at the linked page (https://zh.wikivoyage.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=%E8%8D%94%E6%B3%A2&action=history) --Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:25, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3:LIU ZIFU

Dear Professor,

I am taking a class on understanding small and big data. My classmate ZHANGQI and I decided to use "Longquanyi" as our homework. "Longquanyi" is an administrative district of Chengdu city. I have briefly made some preliminary introduction to this entry so far, if the professor agrees with us on this topic, my classmates and I will revise the layout and then officially start the assignment.

here is link:https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Longquanyi

Thank you Peter011008 (talk) 11:32, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Peter011008 As discussed, this is approved as Chengdu/Longquanyi Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:34, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4: ZHUANG MINNA

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" Among the Deadline 4 task, I've translated an article in English and added references to my personal sandbox

Please check it out, thank you! Minazhuang777 (talk) 12:23, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Minazhuang777 This is looking very good. Now, we need to fix errors with references. Please install this wiki tool (User:Headbomb/unreliable). Then you will see which references in your article are marked in red (are unreliable). They need to be replaced by better ones. For example, several sources in your article are to Wikipedia:GLOBALTIMES, which has been banned from Wikipedia due to too many fake news and propaganda. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:48, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3(Week 5)-LI LINLIN

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis"

The first draft is here. At the same time, I've done one extra edit and showed it to you in class, you guided me to publish it. You can check it here.

Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 12:57, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Good. You should publish your draft Wikivoyage article about Burqin soon as well. Good job Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:53, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4: YUE ZIYI

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

I am translating the article "Future" and have finished the outline.

Please check YZY2233 (talk) 13:20, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Please make sure to address the issues raised in the top (in the banner) on your Chinese article. I see you have also received a message on your Chinese talk page. You should try to fix those issues soon, otherwise your content could be deleted and/or your account banned, which will make it difficult for you to finish your project.
@ZhaoFJx I will add here that the student is translating article from English Wikipedia, so it should not be triggering copypaste/copyvio warnings? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:56, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK, Professor. I have also noticed the message from the administrator. I will revise the question carefully. YZY2233 (talk) 10:17, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Got it. Seems like some Chinese external websites used enwiki texts in their content, so the Future article is similar to other external websites. Thus, as long as it is from enwiki orginlly, the article should be fine. Sincerely ZhaoFJx(T) 23:22, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4:ZHANG XIAOTONG

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" and " "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis'

I am translating the article, this is my sandbox.

Please check.Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 13:49, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hyodong318 Good start. Now please move your draft from English Wikipedia to Chinese Wikipedia Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:57, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3: Week 5白诗棋

Dear Professor, I am taking a class on understanding small and big data.This is my job. I have perfected this place in Yancheng. here is link:https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Yancheng 白诗棋 (talk) 13:52, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@白诗棋 Yancheng is approved as your topic.
Please make sure to add your content as proper listings, with addresses, GPS coordinates, and names in English and Chinese. Right now much of the content you added reads like AI-generated hallucinations that are hard to verify. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:03, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Deadline4:SHAO TIANYI &ZHONG QI

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" with @Kylo09

Among the Deadline 4 tasks, I'm attaching the outline from my sandbox. Please check it.[[21]] —Yeomll (talk) 14:06, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yeomll This is a good start. Please make sure to add English title to your book titles using the 'translated title' parameter, and quote the relevant book range (which pages contain the information cited?). Please try to use high quality English references on this topic found here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:06, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Deadline3:SHAO TIANYI &ZHONG QI

Dear Professor,

I am taking a class on understanding small and big data with @Kylo09 . This is our job.

We have perfected this place in Jining. here is link:[[22]] —Yeomll (talk) 14:27, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yeomll Ok - see above for my suggestions. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:07, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline3: Dabin Kim

Dear Professor,

I am Dabin Kim, taking Media Trends and Globalization and Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.

1) I have completed the assignment for Deadline 3 and would appreciate your review.

2) I have also finished this week's obligatory weekly wiki-editing project and would welcome your feedback.

Thank you. Dbinni (talk) 14:39, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Dbinni For Deadline 3, I do not see your edits at the linked page: https://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Pyeongtaek&action=history Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:08, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry I linked a wrong page.
Please check here. [23] Dbinni (talk) 08:24, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4:QIAN ZIYI

Dear Professor:

I'm Study "Media Trends and Globalization"

In the Deadline 4 mission, I've attached an outline from the sandbox. This is my link.Please check it out. Buryab0ne (talk) 14:50, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Buryab0ne Good start. Please improve your references:
  • Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article
  • Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:10, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4: GUAN YUE

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization".

I am working on two topics, and I have completed the sandbox editing for Media Trends and Globalization, which is one of the topics that I need to translate.

Please check it. Thank you! Uuueol (talk) 16:13, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Uuueol Good start. Now please move your draft from English Wikipedia to Chinese Wikipedia Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:10, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4: CUI ZAN

Dear Professor.

I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.

I am working on two topics,I finished the translation of one of them and this is my sandbox edit!

Please check it out. Thanks! Cuicuizan (talk) 16:25, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cuicuizan Good. When you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:11, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4:XI JIAXIN

Dear Professor: I'm Study "Media Trends and Globalization" In the Deadline 4 mission, I've attached an outline from the sandbox. This is my link.Please check it out. Xjx921 (talk) 04:03, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xjx921 I see. If you are translating the content to English, please move it from Chinese to English Wikipedia. You should work on it in your sandbox on English Wikipedia. By working on it in the wrong language project, many errors can occur. After moving, please fix errors in links and references. It cannot be published until those errors are fixed. I will give you a new review after the content is moved to English Wikipedia - pleaes ping me when you have done so. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:13, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4:HONG HAOTIAN&LI MENGCHEN

Dear Professor.

I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.

We are working on two topics,I finished the translation of one of them and this is my sandbox edit!

Please check it out. Thanks! Honghaotian (talk) 04:10, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Honghaotian
Good start.
Please improve the grammar and vocabulary of your translation. Right now it contains too many errors to be published.
Next, please improve your references:
  • Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article
  • Please format the references so that they have an English title (in addition to the Chinese), and other information (author, date, publisher).
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:15, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4:LI MENGCHEN&HONG HAOTIAN

Dear Professor.

I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.

We are working on two topics,I finished the translation of one of them and this is my sandbox edit!

Please check it out. Thanks! Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:12, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Limengchen2777 Please see my comment to your groupmate above. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:15, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4:HAN YUANYUAN

Dear Professor,I have completed the sandbox editing of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it.Thank you. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:20, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 Good. When you have translated most content, you can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:15, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4:白诗棋

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization". I have completed the sandbox editing Underground Gardens Please check it. Thank you! 白诗棋 (talk) 05:22, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@白诗棋
I assume this is an extra credit project, as I don't have 'underground gardens' recorded in your main project information.
Is this a translation of a Chinese article or your own work?
In either case, please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability On the bright side, you can get extra credit for adding footnotes to the Korean article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:18, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3:HUANG YANHAN

Dear Professor, I have finished editing the draft of Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. Please check it.Sanmenxia.My teammate is Ma Chenxiao@Mcx8202229. HYH031277777 (talk) 05:53, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:19, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4:CAI ZHIHANG

Dear Professor.

I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.

This is my first draft of the sandbox link Caizzz (talk) 06:12, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Caizzz Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
In some cases you have links to Baidu content rather then Wikipedia - please make sure to fix your links. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:20, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is my new link Caizzz (talk) 12:30, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 4 : Lee jisu

Dear professer,

I have completed Deadline 4 of "Media Trends and Globalization".

I practiced translating from English to Korean for "2024 Russian present elections" in the User:Xisuux/sandbox, and I actually added them to Wikipedia. 2024 Russian presidential election

Please check. Xisuux (talk) 06:31, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xisuux Please double check your content. It seems you translated content of the wrong article (something related to the Russian invasion of Ukraine?), not about the Russian election of 2024. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:21, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 3: SHENZIHE

Dear Professor: I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' from the professor.

This is my draft JinCheng.

Thank you for your checking. SHENZIHE (talk) 06:41, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SHENZIHE Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:27, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4(week5)HUANGYANHAN

Dear Professor,I have completed the sandbox editing of Media Trends and Globalization. Please check it.Thank you. HYH031277777 (talk) 08:05, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Good start. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:28, 7 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]