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It seems that a large amount of content was added to this article but never completed. Multiple sections of the text are either missing references entirely or are cited to dead links. Current content additions are needed. Grammatical errors need to be edited as well, although this is not a major problem. A gossipy tone permeates the article which points to biased content.

Lawsuits Section

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More sections?

I think there should always be sections that can give insight on improvement and there are plenty of articles about what it would take to do that in different categories. I have one on fishery spaces and how making sure spacing is prioritized, but also thtat the spaces have actions to make sure they stay protected. https://nyaspubs.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/nyas.14651 — Preceding unsigned comment added by K1carter (talk • contribs) 23:25, 25 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lead Section

The introduction or lead section of the article is somewhat sparse in providing an explanation of the distinguishing features of the Marine Life Protection Act and its plans to address the shortcomings of previously established Marine Protected Areas in California. --ALRueger (talk) 02:54, 26 April 2022 (UTC)ALRueger[reply]

MLPA Implementation Section

There are multiple instances of missing citations in this section. Especially noticeable lack of citations are found towards the end of the Marine Life Protection Act Implementation section, where a lot of information is provided about specific events and data that have no supporting peer reviewed publications to verify their credibility.--ALRueger (talk) 02:55, 26 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The Science Section

This section of the article is where I expected to see the utilization of a lot more research. This would improve the overall credibility and support the need for the Marine Life Protection Act. Additionally, the sources being used are now outdated and more recent scientific evidence is necessary. --ALRueger (talk) 02:58, 26 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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	This section of the article is where I expected to see the utilization of a lot more research. This would improve the overall credibility and support the need for the Marine Life Protection Act. Additionally, the sources being used are now outdated and more recent scientific evidence is necessary. --[[User:ALRueger\|ALRueger]] ([[User talk:ALRueger\|talk]]) 02:58, 26 April 2022 (UTC)~~chg2vhjey~~		This section of the article is where I expected to see the utilization of a lot more research. This would improve the overall credibility and support the need for the Marine Life Protection Act. Additionally, the sources being used are now outdated and more recent scientific evidence is necessary. --[[User:ALRueger\|ALRueger]] ([[User talk:ALRueger\|talk]]) 02:58, 26 April 2022 (UTC)