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{{ping|Sturmvogel 66}} Thank you for this review. Please take a look at my edits and tell me if there is anything else. [[User talk:simongraham|simongraham]] ([[User talk:simongraham|talk]]) 15:12, 27 September 2024 (UTC) |
{{ping|Sturmvogel 66}} Thank you for this review. Please take a look at my edits and tell me if there is anything else. [[User talk:simongraham|simongraham]] ([[User talk:simongraham|talk]]) 15:12, 27 September 2024 (UTC) |
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Latest revision as of 07:58, 25 November 2024
GA Review
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Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 01:24, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 21:51, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:51, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you. I look forward to your comments. simongraham (talk) 04:50, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
- Image properly licensed
- Armed with two 6 in (152 mm) guns, on commissioning, the cruiser was the flagship and largest vessel in the Peruvian fleet. In 1901, the armament was upgraded. awkward
- Reworded.
- Link Ecuador
- Added.
- Does the ship have any kind of armor? If not, then she's an unprotected cruiser.
- The sources have no detail about armor. Updated the links.
- Fix the draught figure in the main body; the figures for length and beam don't match between the infobox and main body
- Fixed and referenced.
- Any idea why such a lengthy amount of time between completion and service entry?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:56, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
- Added a bit of explanation.
@Sturmvogel 66: Thank you for this review. Please take a look at my edits and tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 15:12, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.