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Please review [[WP:NPOV]] and add your comments here. Thanks. [[User:Lukethelibrarian|Lukethelibrarian]] 21:37, 2 Jun 2005 (UTC)
Please review [[WP:NPOV]] and add your comments here. Thanks. [[User:Lukethelibrarian|Lukethelibrarian]] 21:37, 2 Jun 2005 (UTC)

:I appreciate your concerns over this. As previously stated several times, I am gradually putting up references to everything, but don't have a lot of time every day to put into this, so I would appreciate some forebearance in finishing the documentation. The allegations are very serious, however I highly doubt you would demand similar documentation of every action committed by other terrorist organizations, like, say, the IRA, etc.. I intend to cover all sides of the issue, which is why I'm also including the right-wing luddism as well. I think it is important that this movement be documented as extensively as possible and I am welcoming other contributors in this effort (I have already enlisted support from others who have investigated this movement), but I object to being held to a higher standard than is accepted with those documenting other subversive/secretive insurgency/guerilla/terrorist organizations which normally require a sophisticated intelligence service to find out extensive information about. I also appreciate those who have restored edits in the past that have been erased by some I suspect of either sympathy for or involvement in the neo-luddite movement. They have a vested interest in keeping their organization and activities secret from the general public in order to invent the false public perception of a 'grass roots' uprising. I guarantee you that everything here will be either documented or removed/edited by myself. [[User:Mlorrey|Mlorrey]] 05:12, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)

Revision as of 05:12, 3 June 2005

I "fixed" this entry, removing a bunch of propaganda from right wing sources. Frankly, this article shouldn't even exist, because there is simply no self-identified "neo-luddite" movement. This entry is an attempt by right wingers to establish that such a mythical movement exists. The stuff about Teresa Heniz Kerry funding this so-called movement is the dead giveaway that this entry has no factual basis.

How do people go about removing article from Wikipedia that have no factual basis? This "neo-luddite" movement is a right wing fantasy.

Chuck Munson. (Infoshop.org).

Here is Wikipedia's deletion policy. The term "neo-luddite" is in common usage, and I doubt you will find much community consensus for deletion. While few would identify themselves as "neo-luddites", there certainly is a diverse movement advocating everything from a critical analysis of modern technologies to the elimination of such technologies. ElBenevolente 22:48, 21 Apr 2005 (UTC)

I concur that this article is still POV-heavy; the list of "prominent neo-luddites" is particularly suspicious for the reasons cited by Munson above. Specifically, I removed Gretel Ehlrich from the list after reviewing a number of interviews (i.e. Library Journal 129:18 [84] 15 Nov 2004) with Ehlrich as well as biographical overviews of her life and writings (see Contemporary Authors and Dictionary of Literary Biography) which showed no evidence of the positions, beliefs or activities described by the article. Lukethelibrarian 21:36, 31 May 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I concur that Gretel Ehrlich doesn't belong there, someone modified the earlier reference to Paul R Ehrlich, who is a noted neo-malthusian/neo-luddite. I have done extensive research on the movement and am working on this article. I do not have time to complete it at once. However, Munson is a member of one group involved in the network, so his opinions here amount to non-NPOV revisionism and disinformation. Mlorrey 20:00, 1 Jun 2005 (UTC)

On Fukuyama

"Fukuyama is famously wrong for predicting the end of history with the fall of the U.S.S.R". Yet the The End of History says "Fukuyama's thesis is often misinterpreted and misunderstood. For example, it is frequently claimed that Fukuyama believes that history ended in 1989 (with the fall of the Berlin Wall)."

Fukuyama says, "What we may be witnessing in not just the end of the Cold War, or the passing of a particular period of post-war history, but the end of history as such: that is, the end point of mankind's ideological evolution and the universalization of Western liberal democracy as the final form of human government." (quoted from "The End of History?", 1989) What is clear to most is that liberal democracy is not the end-state of human ideological evolution, despite its continuing attempts to retain the idea of the social-welfare semi-free market nation-state through hook, crook, or force of arms. Fukuyama is famously wrong because the promise of transhuman advancement and the future technological singularity indicate a future stage of punctuated equilibrium in human affairs, the results of which are impossible to predict. See Ray Kurzweil's books for further elucidation on these ideas. It is for this reason that Fukuyama now calls transhumanism, "the world's most dangerous idea", if only because it will further demonstrate how wrong he was. Transhumanism is dangerous to his future royalty stream... Mlorrey 16:43, 2 Jun 2005 (UTC)

Specific POV concerns

It seems to me that this topic is covered more thoroughly and with better NPOV in Primitivism. Could this topic be redirected there?

My specific reasons for adding the NPOV dispute tag are the following.

The article fails to provide evidence to support/document:

  • ...under "Network Structure"...
    • "significant ties and support between dedicated neo-luddite groups" -- no evidence of ties between any of the groups listed
    • "providing shelter outside the US to terrorist fugitives" [The Anarchist Organization]
    • "providing... anonymous website hosting and encrypted email communications for various ad hoc sabotage groups or campaigns" [the associated link does not support this claim -- it appears to include links to 3rd party tools and educational material, no indication of providing named services]
    • Alleged funding sources for Ruckus Society, and relevance of that funding allegation to the remainder of the article
    • Alleged operations of IWW and activities of "Project Underground" (moles.org link is dead, but whois indicates it is registered to Project Underground in Berkeley CA)
    • Alleged "entryism" campaign of WWP; alleged relationship between WWP and other named groups
  • ...under "Use of Ad Hoc Fronts"...
    • alleged coordination/adoption of a uniform strategy employing decentralized ad-hoc fronts. Occam's Razor: without evidence of coordination, incidents should be considered separate.
  • ...under "Violence"...
    • allegation that 2 specific incidents and 2 categorical groupings of incidents are "successful neo-luddite attacks".
  • ...under "Politics: Stem cells"...
    • relevance of Bush policy to article, relationship between "neo-luddite movement" and Bush actions
    • relevance of EU GMO policy to article, relationship between "neo-luddite movement" and EU government actions.
  • ...under "Prominent neo-luddites"...
    • relationship of Paul R. Ehrlich, Fritjof Capra and Donella Meadows to the activities or organizations described in the article
    • relationship of Mike Roselle, Kirkpatrick Sale, Howie Wolk, Bill Joy, or Bill McKibben to activities or organizations described in the article
    • relevance of Fukuyama's predictions on fall of USSR to content of article.

The article includes the following POV language unsupported by evidence:

  • ...under "Network Structure"...
    • "Ruckus Society operates several boot camps for... neo-luddite saboteurs"
    • Comparison between infoshop.org and Sinn Fein
    • "In this [antecedent unclear], WWP is using luddism to push its goal..."
  • ...under "Violence"...
    • "widespread embarrassment and half-hearted disavowal by mainstream members of the movement"
  • ...under "Right-wing Neo-Luddism"...
    • "no transhumanist has ever attacked or sabotaged anyone or anything, while luddites do so as a matter of right."

The article uses the following excessively vague and/or "weasel terms":

  • ...under "Network Structure"...
    • ..."to what many consider to be a rather extreme degree"
  • ...under "Violence"...
    • "destruction of genetically modified organisms in a number of locations"
    • "attacks on prominent researchers and technology executives beyond the highly publicized serial bombings of the Unabomber."
  • ...under "Politics: GMO"...
    • "A number of countries..."
  • ...under "Right-wing Neo-Luddism"...
    • "...members of the right wing acting in opposition to technology are primarily at the level of..."

Please review WP:NPOV and add your comments here. Thanks. Lukethelibrarian 21:37, 2 Jun 2005 (UTC)

I appreciate your concerns over this. As previously stated several times, I am gradually putting up references to everything, but don't have a lot of time every day to put into this, so I would appreciate some forebearance in finishing the documentation. The allegations are very serious, however I highly doubt you would demand similar documentation of every action committed by other terrorist organizations, like, say, the IRA, etc.. I intend to cover all sides of the issue, which is why I'm also including the right-wing luddism as well. I think it is important that this movement be documented as extensively as possible and I am welcoming other contributors in this effort (I have already enlisted support from others who have investigated this movement), but I object to being held to a higher standard than is accepted with those documenting other subversive/secretive insurgency/guerilla/terrorist organizations which normally require a sophisticated intelligence service to find out extensive information about. I also appreciate those who have restored edits in the past that have been erased by some I suspect of either sympathy for or involvement in the neo-luddite movement. They have a vested interest in keeping their organization and activities secret from the general public in order to invent the false public perception of a 'grass roots' uprising. I guarantee you that everything here will be either documented or removed/edited by myself. Mlorrey 05:12, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)