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Thanks Statisticalregression but it appears that the article needs yet more copy editting. What really concerns me is that the bulk of this entry reads like an ECC advert or brochure. Things such as teachers receiving "2 ''full'' weeks of training" seem overly enthusiastic. [[User:76.6.173.2|76.6.173.2]] 12:44, 17 October 2007 (UTC) |
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Hello - I did some copy editing, sourcing, and shuffling of content on the article. I didn't remove much but there's still a few things that are a tad POV/promotional. I'll continue to add sources and content when I can. [[User:Statisticalregression|Statisticalregression]] 06:34, 14 August 2007 (UTC) |
Hello - I did some copy editing, sourcing, and shuffling of content on the article. I didn't remove much but there's still a few things that are a tad POV/promotional. I'll continue to add sources and content when I can. [[User:Statisticalregression|Statisticalregression]] 06:34, 14 August 2007 (UTC) |
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Concerns
Thanks Statisticalregression but it appears that the article needs yet more copy editting. What really concerns me is that the bulk of this entry reads like an ECC advert or brochure. Things such as teachers receiving "2 full weeks of training" seem overly enthusiastic. 76.6.173.2 12:44, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
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Hello - I did some copy editing, sourcing, and shuffling of content on the article. I didn't remove much but there's still a few things that are a tad POV/promotional. I'll continue to add sources and content when I can. Statisticalregression 06:34, 14 August 2007 (UTC)