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I've spent some time taking this to a polished state, and I believe it's in FA-shape. I'd like comments and suggestions on how I can make it even better. (Two sources are heavily referenced, since there's a sad lack of books available – more info in the article.) Thanks in advance! – [[User:Scartol|<span style="color:#006600">Scartol</span>]] · [[User_talk:Scartol|<span style="color:#006600"><small>Talk</small></span>]] 02:13, 14 November 2007 (UTC) |
I've spent some time taking this to a polished state, and I believe it's in FA-shape. I'd like comments and suggestions on how I can make it even better. (Two sources are heavily referenced, since there's a sad lack of books available – more info in the article.) Thanks in advance! – [[User:Scartol|<span style="color:#006600">Scartol</span>]] · [[User_talk:Scartol|<span style="color:#006600"><small>Talk</small></span>]] 02:13, 14 November 2007 (UTC) |
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Certainly a very strong article. My few comments are: |
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:Please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup> |
:Please add <code><nowiki>{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}</nowiki></code> along with the required parameters to the article - see [[Wikipedia:Persondata]] for more information.<sup>[[User:AndyZ/G#persondata|[?]]]</sup> |
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:Why does the photograph say 1868 but 1880 on the image page? |
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:"in the midst of slavery's tumult" is a strange phrase, can you reword? |
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:The map and picture of Susan B. Anthony have no source specified. |
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:Can you cite "Because the specifics of her route were used by other fugitive slaves"? |
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:Presumably she and John Tubman lived separately after their marriage? Perhaps you could mention this? Could you be more specific about the marriages? They all seem to have committed bigamy quite happily, presumably marriages were common law and not official ones. |
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:The tag on the picture of David Hunter should be updated. [[User:DrKiernan|DrKiernan]] 09:38, 14 November 2007 (UTC) |
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I've spent some time taking this to a polished state, and I believe it's in FA-shape. I'd like comments and suggestions on how I can make it even better. (Two sources are heavily referenced, since there's a sad lack of books available – more info in the article.) Thanks in advance! – Scartol · Talk 02:13, 14 November 2007 (UTC)
Certainly a very strong article. My few comments are:
- Please add
{{persondata|PLEASE SEE [[WP:PDATA]]!}}along with the required parameters to the article - see Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.[?] - Why does the photograph say 1868 but 1880 on the image page?
- "in the midst of slavery's tumult" is a strange phrase, can you reword?
- The map and picture of Susan B. Anthony have no source specified.
- Can you cite "Because the specifics of her route were used by other fugitive slaves"?
- Presumably she and John Tubman lived separately after their marriage? Perhaps you could mention this? Could you be more specific about the marriages? They all seem to have committed bigamy quite happily, presumably marriages were common law and not official ones.
- The tag on the picture of David Hunter should be updated. DrKiernan 09:38, 14 November 2007 (UTC)