Talk:Forensic entomologist

Ok, guys. Make sure you make the changes that warning banner is requesting before the date, or this article will be deleted. ABrundage, Texas A&M University (talk) 22:36, 20 March 2008 (UTC)

Anyone have any Ideas on how to fix our stuff? It seems like we need to add some illustrations and break the text up some. I can edit mine down to the bare necessities. Greg09Ag (talk) 22:43, 20 March 2008 (UTC)

Once thing I noticed is that there is an article, although short, on medical entomology. You might want to change your pages internal link to direct to that page. I would also consider expanding the lead section to explain more on what your article is about. The sentence there is a little short and vague. Try briefly going over the topics you will be covering. --PinDr4gon (talk) 22:26, 22 March 2008 (UTC)

I was going to include how they incorporate entomology in law in the introduction, but I'm not sure how to word it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Galaga180 (talk • contribs)

You should also correctly reference your sources throughout your article.--Angelina5288 (talk) 02:22, 26 March 2008 (UTC)

I highly recommend you take a look at the WP Manual of Style. Just at a quick glance: the article title is capitalized as if it's the title of a book or film, so you may want to move it from The Forensic Entomologist to forensic entomologist. Also, the lines between each section is a little unconventional. All things considered, though, you're off to a good start! Good luck on the assignment! – ClockworkSoul 02:27, 26 March 2008 (UTC)

One more thing: I see you have references at the bottom, which is excellent. You might want to skim Wikipedia:Citing sources to see how we handles references here. Good luck again! – ClockworkSoul 02:30, 26 March 2008 (UTC)

I moved the references under the title 'sources' for now and am putting the footnotes under the references title.Galaga180 (talk) 03:33, 27 March 2008 (UTC)

Make sure and reference people in a professional way (ie: "Dr. Tomberlin" as opposed to "Jeff" and use the full name "Jeffery" instead of "Jeff" the first time you reference him), and use footnotes for references instead of having just a sources section. This page is very informative though, and easy to follow! Good job guys! Labright (talk) 01:44, 27 March 2008 (UTC)

I edited our introduction. Please tell me if you guys think it is better than before. Garza j e (talk) 00:31, 31 March 2008 (UTC)garza_j_e

After looking at your article, I noticed you do not have any Categories on your page relevant to your topic. You should include categories at the end of your article to fit wikipedia's requirements. Here is the link to the Categorical Index--Amandamartinez06 (talk) 06:42, 8 April 2008 (UTC)

The paper seems like it has enough information, but maybe needs more specific details and examples of what forensic entomologists do. There aren't really any pictures either. Maybe show some entomologists in the field or something. Elaborating on the tools section would probably be a good idea also, not just listing what they are. (Medillar (talk) 22:24, 8 April 2008 (UTC))