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:Concur. Second anniversary of scuttling is coming up. It would be interesting to see what two year's growth looks like. [[User:Binksternet|Binksternet]] ([[User talk:Binksternet|talk]]) 22:50, 27 April 2008 (UTC) |
:Concur. Second anniversary of scuttling is coming up. It would be interesting to see what two year's growth looks like. [[User:Binksternet|Binksternet]] ([[User talk:Binksternet|talk]]) 22:50, 27 April 2008 (UTC) |
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I will be diving the Mighty O next week (July 4 and 5 2008). I will be taking high quality photos and will make them available here if someone can show me how. Email me at jetlife2@mac.com. Thanks Gareth Richards [[User:Jetlife2|Jetlife2]] ([[User talk:Jetlife2|talk]]) 17:40, 27 June 2008 (UTC) |
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NPOV
Down at the bottom, someone's laid it on REALLY thick about how selfish and nasty sailors oppose opening the Oriskany as a park for 'millions to enjoy' and instead want it scuttled.
- Gah. I've tried to cut the bigotry a bit. If you concur, you might consider removing the NPOV tag now. ➥the Epopt 13:44, 10 May 2006 (UTC)
ex-Oriskany
Even if it might be technically correct to refer to a decommissioned ship in this way (ex-...), I would think in common usage (and common sense) that object would still be considered the ship that it used to be. Therefore, I would suggest not using that expression.
- Thank you for your suggestion, but I will continue to use the correct and standard expression. This is an encyclopedia. We value precision of expression over popular usage. ➥the Epopt 15:09, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
Lack of common sense knows no bounds when people's egos are involved.
McCain's 210' Dive?
A 210' dive is pretty ambitious for the soon to be 70 year old Senator. This is well beyond sport diving limits and into mixed gas/techical dive territory. Anyone have a citation for McCain's statement? I assume the reef will get most of its play from the sport bottom fishing community rather than recreational divers. --138.162.5.7 21:37, 26 May 2006 (UTC)
- The recreational diving sites I've seen say that the bottom of the ship lies at 130', and the top of the island is at only 70. Maybe he can do it, I don't know. More power to him. :) - Tronno ( t | c ) 16:47, 23 August 2006 (UTC)
- Tronno's correct, I believe. While the hull of the ship rests at 210', the deck is around 130' and the island rises to a depth of 70'. Most of the recreational dives only go to the island and, presumably, that's as far as McCain would go if he went. croll 19:12, 7 December 2006 (UTC)
Consistency and Map Links
I noticed the paragraph beginning "The Navy announced 5 April 2004..." is apparently inconsistent in terms of the dates. Specifically, it made the announcement in 2004 but awarded the contract in 2003? That's certainly possible, but seems more like a typo given the context... Also, the satellite imagery map links don't appear to work. (Very interesting and well done article, though.) croll 20:53, 15 November 2006 (UTC)
Class curiosity
The main Oriskany page refers to the ship as an Essex-class carrier; history.navy.mil refers to her as a Ticonderoga-class.
I know the two classes were substantially similar, so it may be picking nits, but I'd like to know the correct class.
Estoude1 22:06, 24 January 2007 (UTC)
- Interesting question. The U.S. Navy lists her as a Ticonderoga class aircraft carrier, so I think that's the proper way to go. [1] That means changing quite a bit of information though and I think several different wiki articles; more than I have the time or knowledge to do. croll 21:00, 29 June 2007 (UTC)
Blistered (in regards to hull) labeled vague
I have removed the label of "vague" from the word blister. It is a technical term and is correctly applied. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.163.147.59 (talk) 03:22, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
- Wikipeedia is not read by technical specialists. Using the phrase "the hull was blistered" is odd usage to me, as I don't recall the term being used as a verb. I assume this means that side "blisters", or small sponsons, were added to the hull, but the wording leaves it open to possibly meaning the paint "blistered". While I'm not a naval expert by any means, I do have a decent working knowledge of terminology used. However, many Wikipedia users do not, and this phrasing would mean nothing to them. I assumed I know what it meant, but was uncertain enough not to change the wording myself without acces to a reliable source. If you were absolutely certain of the meaning, you should have changed the wording - that is what the {{vague}} tag is used for, and why I put it there. Fix it, then remove the tag, instead of assuming every reader has your technical background. - BillCJ (talk) 04:11, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
diving photos needed
Divers' photos would improve this article. doncram (talk) 16:06, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
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- Concur. Second anniversary of scuttling is coming up. It would be interesting to see what two year's growth looks like. Binksternet (talk) 22:50, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
I will be diving the Mighty O next week (July 4 and 5 2008). I will be taking high quality photos and will make them available here if someone can show me how. Email me at jetlife2@mac.com. Thanks Gareth Richards Jetlife2 (talk) 17:40, 27 June 2008 (UTC)
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