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It's difficult to discern from a brief reading of the article what makes Hunziker notable. The genealogy is very detailed and perhaps submerges the relevant information. There is [[WP:PEA]] in the section on his Professorship "It is difficult to overstate the importance..." [[User:Ning-ning|Ning ning]] ([[User talk:Ning-ning|talk]]) 07:38, 19 August 2008 (UTC) |
It's difficult to discern from a brief reading of the article what makes Hunziker notable. The genealogy is very detailed and perhaps submerges the relevant information. There is [[WP:PEA]] in the section on his Professorship "It is difficult to overstate the importance..." [[User:Ning-ning|Ning ning]] ([[User talk:Ning-ning|talk]]) 07:38, 19 August 2008 (UTC) |
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Based on your comment, I minimized much of the family discussion by creating a separate stub for the [[Karl Otto Hunziker | father]]. Professor Hunziker is notable due to the critical work he performed in the dairy business. His contributions in that industry and hence to the general public's welfare were significant.--[[User:Rpclod|Rpclod]] ([[User talk:Rpclod|talk]]) 16:53, 22 August 2008 (UTC) |
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It's difficult to discern from a brief reading of the article what makes Hunziker notable. The genealogy is very detailed and perhaps submerges the relevant information. There is WP:PEA in the section on his Professorship "It is difficult to overstate the importance..." Ning ning (talk) 07:38, 19 August 2008 (UTC)
Based on your comment, I minimized much of the family discussion by creating a separate stub for the father. Professor Hunziker is notable due to the critical work he performed in the dairy business. His contributions in that industry and hence to the general public's welfare were significant.--Rpclod (talk) 16:53, 22 August 2008 (UTC)