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Joseph Maxwell

I am nominating this article to be reviewed for A-Class as I believe it meets the criteria. I have made substantial improvements to the article over the past few weeks and it has been recently passed as a GA. I am willing to made further edits for improvement. Any and all comments and suggestions welcome. Thanks, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 15:32, 4 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support with comments,

The link to the Spring Offensive can be considered an Easter Egg (this has actually come up for me before), and so I would suggest having the text of the link read: Throughout the spring of 1918, the 18th Battalion was involved in operations to repel the German spring offensive. (Or something similar, which you believe fits better.)

Otherwise, I can't really comment. The lead can probably use an expansion, if it's possible, but perhaps others would disagree with me. It looks good, so I am happy to support. Good luck! JonCatalán^(Talk) 02:55, 5 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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 ===[[Joseph Maxwell]]===
 I am nominating this article to be reviewed for A-Class as I believe it meets the criteria. I have made substantial improvements to the article over the past few weeks and it has been recently passed as a GA. I am willing to made further edits for improvement. Any and all comments and suggestions welcome. Thanks, [[User:Abraham, B.S.|Abraham, B.S.]] ([[User talk:Abraham, B.S.|talk]]) 15:32, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
+'''Support''' with comments,
+: The link to the Spring Offensive can be considered an Easter Egg (this has actually come up for me before), and so I would suggest having the text of the link read: ''Throughout the spring of 1918, the 18th Battalion was involved in operations to repel the German ''spring offensive''.'' (Or something similar, which you believe fits better.)
+Otherwise, I can't really comment.  The lead can probably use an expansion, if it's possible, but perhaps others would disagree with me.  It looks good, so I am happy to support.  Good luck! '''[[User:Catalan|JonCatalán]]'''<sup>[[User talk:Catalan|(Talk)]]</sup> 02:55, 5 October 2008 (UTC)