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[[User:Redpathanderson|Redpathanderson]] - hey, it's good to meet you. Could you detail your issues with my edits? - I would like to have this article conform to our [[Wikipedia:Layout|layout guidelines]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style|style manual]], along with such policies as [[Wikipedia:Avoid peacock terms|avoid peacock terms]]. Thanks --[[User:Neutrality|Neutrality]]<sup>[[User talk:Neutrality|talk]]</sup> 05:09, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
[[User:Redpathanderson|Redpathanderson]] - hey, it's good to meet you. Could you detail your issues with my edits? - I would like to have this article conform to our [[Wikipedia:Layout|layout guidelines]] and [[Wikipedia:Manual of Style|style manual]], along with such policies as [[Wikipedia:Avoid peacock terms|avoid peacock terms]]. Thanks --[[User:Neutrality|Neutrality]]<sup>[[User talk:Neutrality|talk]]</sup> 05:09, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
:Also, I looked at the external links [http://www.lincsheritage.org/community_heritage/guides_information/treasure_trove/article.php?id=18] and [http://www.castleuk.net/castle_lists_midlands/121/torkseycastle.htm] and there are several passages given verbatim without quotation marks or other attribution in the article, which is certainly a [[Wikipedia:Copyright violations:copyright violations]]...This needs to be addressed and I think my edits go a little bit toward doing that (although now that I am aware of these sources, I'll work on sourcing and eliminating the copyvio). [[User:Neutrality|Neutrality]]<sup>[[User talk:Neutrality|talk]]</sup> 05:13, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

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Redpathanderson - hey, it's good to meet you. Could you detail your issues with my edits? - I would like to have this article conform to our layout guidelines and style manual, along with such policies as avoid peacock terms. Thanks --Neutralitytalk 05:09, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Also, I looked at the external links [1] and [2] and there are several passages given verbatim without quotation marks or other attribution in the article, which is certainly a Wikipedia:Copyright violations:copyright violations...This needs to be addressed and I think my edits go a little bit toward doing that (although now that I am aware of these sources, I'll work on sourcing and eliminating the copyvio). Neutralitytalk 05:13, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]