Talk:Roswell High School (Georgia)/GA1

GA Review

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Hello. I will be reviewing this article's GA nomination. Here are some initial suggestions for improvement:

• Per WP:LEAD, an article of this size should be about three or four full paragraphs summarizing all the main points of the article.
• There are some MoS problems. A good copyeditor should be able to fix them. If all the other points get addressed, I am willing to do this myself.
• "Band" and "Drama" need citations.
• "In 2008 the Hornets finished fourth in the state." - ref?
• "Roswell also won a Track and Field State Championship in 1961 while finishing second in 1957 and 1974." - ref?
• Any stat, record, or championship needs a source.
• A couple of the notable alumni need sources.
• Only the first word in a header should be capital unless it is a proper name.

That is it for now. I'll give the article seven days for improvement. When these issues are addressed, I'll add some more suggestions. Nikki♥311 23:55, 4 January 2009 (UTC)

Thank you. I have a question though. I am having trouble finding citations for state runner-ups except for the very recent ones. The information was taken from the banners hanging in the school gym. Should I just take them out and focus on the state championships? AUburnTiger (talk) 17:45, 8 January 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm. I'm surprised that information isn't available on the school's website. If a source can't be found for runner-ups, I'd remove them. The championships are the important information, anyway, IMO. Nikki♥311 03:22, 9 January 2009 (UTC)

Let me know here when you are ready for me to look back over the article. Nikki♥311 02:51, 12 January 2009 (UTC)

I think everything has been address, so whenever you can go back over it, feel free. 24.179.34.42 (talk) 02:58, 12 January 2009 (UTC)