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Is the external link to the apple logo really necessary or valuable in any way? [[Special:Contributions/76.126.99.143|76.126.99.143]] ([[User talk:76.126.99.143|talk]]) 03:10, 20 May 2009 (UTC) |
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Replaced comma with a semicolon:
"The diamond ring effect is seen when only one bead is left, a shining diamond set in a bright ring around the lunar silhouette."
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"The diamond ring effect is seen when only one bead is left; a shining diamond set in a bright ring around the lunar silhouette."
Jsovine (talk) 20:50, 26 February 2009 (UTC)
Contradiction
The article says the phenomenon was first noted in 1836, but it was painted in 1735. Would be nice if someone rewrote things to resolve this contradiction. 71.219.230.36 (talk) 14:25, 27 February 2009 (UTC)
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Is the external link to the apple logo really necessary or valuable in any way? 76.126.99.143 (talk) 03:10, 20 May 2009 (UTC)