Talk:Elizabeth II/GA1

GA Review

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Hey all. I'll be reviewing this article for possible GA status. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 02:49, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

This article has some serious issues that preclude it from achieving GA status as-is. However, to allow contributors opportunity to address my concerns, I am placing the article on hold. Nikkimaria (talk) 14:55, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Writing and formatting

• "and called "Lilibet"" -> "and was called "Lilibet""
  • Corrected
• Should be consistent in whether quote marks close before or after punctuation marks.
  • Whole sentences have quote marks after the punctuation mark, fragments have quote marks before punctuation, per WP:MoS
• "Caesarian section" -> "Caesarean section"
  • Corrected
• Would suggest direct-linking to the section on 1st Buckingham Palace Company
  • Done
• "dubbing Philip as" -> "dubbing Philip"
  • Corrected
• What does the term "cadet relative" mean?
  • Removed
• "During their Maltese visits, the children remained in Britain" - here, "their" seems to refer to the children, but it should be the parents
  • Corrected
• "embarked on a six month, around the world tour" - should use hyphens
  • Corrected
• "though the Prime Minister Eden, denied it" - either extraneous comma (and the) or missing comma, take your pick
  • Corrected
• "are you there Mr. Prime Minister?", -> shouldn't end with a comma
  • Corrected
• "However, evidence mounted that their relationship had hardened as the years passed,[89] until it was revealed in May 2007 that the Queen was "exasperated and frustrated" by Blair's actions, especially by what she saw as a detachment from rural issues, as well as a too-casual approach (he requested that the Queen call him "Tony") and a contempt for British heritage" - run-on sentence
• "Elizabeth could become the longest-lived British head of state (surpassing Richard Cromwell) on 29 January 2012, the longest-reigning monarch in British history (surpassing Queen Victoria) on 10 September 2015 at age 89, and the longest-reigning monarch in European history (surpassing King Louis XIV of France) on 26 May 2024, when she would be 98" - why are there ages for two dates? I would argue for either one or all three. Also, should maintain the "at age..." construction for the last age (if it is kept).
• Instead of blood pressure, consider linking to hypertension
• The long quote under "Canadian national unity" might be better off summarized and cited than simply quoted
  • Removed
• Why are some of her titles only mentioned in the lead and not in the "titles" section?
• "Elizabeth has received a many honours" - remove "a"
  • Corrected
• "Bibliography" is the term generally used for books written by the subject of the article. I would suggest making the previous section "Notes" and this one "References"
  • Corrected

Accuracy and verifiability

• The lead says she is the fourth-longest-reigning British monarch, but it says third-longest later in the article. Which is correct?
  • Resolved
• All quotations need citations for GA status
• Citations needed for:

• To the dismay of the royal family, Crawford later published a biography
• her Guides badges

• Removed

• There was some suggestion that the two princesses be evacuated to Canada

• Reference at the end of the sentence

• The ideas were rejected by the Home Secretary, on the grounds that it might cause conflict between north and south Wales
• Before the marriage, Philip renounced his Greek and Danish titles, and adopted the style Lieutenant Philip Mountbatten, the surname adopted by his mother's family
• The marriage was not without controversy: Philip was Greek Orthodox, had no financial standing, and had sisters who had married German noblemen with Nazi links
• The wedding was seen as the first glimmer of a hope of rebirth
• Elizabeth and Philip received over 2,500 wedding gifts from around the world
• In post-war Britain, it was not acceptable for any of the Duke of Edinburgh's German relations to be invited to the wedding
• in the words of Martin Charteris, "the Queen was naturally sympathetic towards the Princess, but I think she thought – she hoped – given time, the affair would peter out."
• She became the first reigning monarch of Australia and New Zealand to visit those nations
• Eden recommended that Elizabeth consult...
• In both 1957 and 1963, the Queen came under criticism for appointing the Prime Minister on the advice of a small number of ministers, or a single minister
• During a trip to Ghana, she refused to keep her distance from President Kwame Nkrumah, despite him being a target for assassins
• In 1969, Elizabeth sent one of 73 Apollo 11 Goodwill Messages to NASA for the historic first lunar landing
• The Queen took a deep interest in the constitutional debate, especially following the failure of Bill C-60
• Commentators were universally shocked by the apparent attack on the Queen's life, even after it was revealed that the shots fired were blanks
• it was rumoured that Elizabeth was worried that Thatcher's economic policies fostered social divisions
• Thatcher later clearly conveyed her personal admiration for the Queen, and expressed her belief that the idea of animosity between the two of them had been played up because they were both women
• The Queen called 1992 her "annus horribilis" in a speech on 24 November 1992
• In 1991, she became the first British monarch to address a joint session of the United States Congress
• It was initially thought that Elizabeth had very good relations with Tony Blair
• until it was revealed in May 2007 that the Queen was "exasperated and frustrated" by Blair's actions, especially by what she saw as a detachment from rural issues, as well as a too-casual approach (he requested that the Queen call him "Tony") and a contempt for British heritage
• Elizabeth was rumoured to have shown concern that the British Armed Forces were overstretched, particularly in Iraq and Afghanistan, as well as "surprise" over Blair's shifting of their weekly meetings from Tuesday to Wednesday afternoons
• Relations between the Queen and the Duke of Edinburgh and Blair and his wife, Cherie, were reported to be distant, as the two couples shared few common interests
• In 2005, she was the first Canadian monarch to address the Legislative Assembly of Alberta
• While she continues to have what is described as excellent health and is seldom ill
• While Buckingham Palace did not comment, medical experts stated that the Queen would have suffered no pain, and would be back to normal within a week or two, without lasting damage. However, they also mentioned that burst blood vessels, though common in the elderly, could be a sign of high blood pressure
• in November 2006, there were worries that the Queen would not be well enough to open the British parliament, and, though she was able to attend, plans were drawn up to cover her possible absence
• Sandringham House and Balmoral Castle are privately owned by the Queen, having inherited them from her father on his death, along with the Duchy of Lancaster, itself valued at £310 million and which transferred a private income to the monarch of £9.811 million in 2006. Income from the British Crown Estate—with holdings of £7 billion—is transferred to her British treasury in return for Civil List payments
• When told that the separatists were showing a lead in the polls, Elizabeth revealed that she felt the "referendum may go the wrong way", adding, "if I can help in any way, I will be happy to do so." However, she pointedly refused to accept the advice, from the man whom she believed to be Chrétien, that she intervene in the referendum without seeing a draft speech first

• Removed

• Elizabeth personally worships with the Anglican church
• When in conversation with the Queen, the practice is to initially address her as Your Majesty and thereafter as Ma'am.
• Elizabeth has been Colonel-in-Chief, Captain-General, Air-Commodore-in-Chief, Commissioner, Brigadier, Commandant-in-Chief, and Royal Colonel of at least 96 units and formations throughout the Commonwealth
• Following her marriage, these arms were impaled with those of the Duke of Edinburgh (and might also want to explain what "impaled" means in this context)
• This same badge is also used as the Queen's personal flag for her role as Head of the Commonwealth, or for visiting Commonwealth countries where she is not head of state

• Should "Windsor" be included as part of her name in the lead?
• Note which of the links require log-in or subscription
• Ref 45 needs to be expanded
  • Removed
• The links to the official website are all redirected to its home page, instead of the intended target
  • Updated
• Ref 57 has redundant dating
  • Removed
• Refs 89, 117, 118 appear to be broken
  • Removed or corrected
• Need publisher for Ref 94
• Need consistent formatting for "Further reading" entries
• External link 5 is broken
  • Removed
• Should not have the same site in both "References" and "External links"

Broad

No issues noted

Neutrality

• Numerous violations of WP:WTA and WP:Weasel, adding an editorial bias to the article which needs to be addressed

Stability

• While there are no ongoing edit wars, there have been minor issues with stability in the past, including a recent naming dispute. These issues are not, however, significant enough to merit a fail on this criterion.

Images

• • • I have a wonderful image that I would love to add - but am not sure how to really use Wikipedia. If anyone could help me do this I would appreciate it. You can e-mail me at joshwasylciw@hotmail.com for the image.

• Lizwar.jpg is tagged as lacking author information
• Qu&DoE_Wedding.png no longer has a fair-use rationale because of issues with the "Historic fur" tag. This needs to be addressed before GA status can be achieved
• Queencrown.jpg is missing a fair-use rationale, and the source is a broken link
• EIIR-Aus-1.jpg needs a fair-use rationale specific to this article
• Blason_Elizabeth_Alexandra_Mary_du_Royaume-Uni.svg‎'s description needs to be completely translated - only a partial translation is present