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Fixed, thanks 198.181.161.250 (talk) 12:06, 10 August 2009 (UTC)djs[reply]

Stabbed

The article says she was stabbed, but "so no one had realized she'd been stabbed, and thought perhaps she had a seizure or medical ailment. The identity of the man/men who spoke to the desk clerk has never been determined." Clearly someone at some stage realised she had been stabbed or we wouldn't know she was stabbed in the article. I presume this was discovered in the autopsy, but this isn't clear from the article. Also the time is given in 12 hour format with making it clear if it was am or pm. The fact that she was supposed to be there during office hours and it seems unlikely the library was open at 4am suggests its pm but this isn't clear. Nil Einne (talk) 17:45, 4 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed, thanks! Any other suggestions to help get this pages' quality rating up? 198.181.161.250 (talk) 12:07, 10 August 2009 (UTC) djs[reply]

One or two

It is suprising that the desk clerk cannot remember how many men spoke to him or her.

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 Fixed, thanks!  Any other suggestions to help get this pages' quality rating up? [[Special:Contributions/198.181.161.250|198.181.161.250]] ([[User talk:198.181.161.250|talk]]) 12:07, 10 August 2009 (UTC) djs
+== One or two ==
+It is suprising that the desk clerk cannot remember how many men spoke to
+him or her.