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A fact from Kim Ok-vin appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 29 January 2008 (check views). A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2008/January.

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Changes to article by User:Belov

A more thorough explanation of why these are not good changes:

Kim Ok-bin, not Kim Ok Bin; please see WP:NC-KO regarding given names.
The text added to the lead is a copyvio [1] and unencyclopedic in tone.
The "Career" section is focused on that aspect of her life. Merging the part about her martial arts and renaming it "Biography" is not good because it's less specific and combining two unrelated things.
"Controversy" does not make a good section heading because it's a subjective term; see this edit.
Filmographies should be presented in chronologicla order and in table format; see relevant sections of MOS:WORKS and WP:FILMBIO.
Trivia sections should be avoided per WP:TRIVIA and the content here is unsourced; [2] is not a reliable source.
Gallery is unnecessary per WP:IG.

Reverting these changes does not constitute "vandalism" as they are contrary to policy and MOS guidelines. Please discuss before continuing to restore this content to the article. PC78 (talk) 19:45, 20 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

My edits

The sections of the article weren't adequate. Martial arts was only 1 sentence and could have been placed in with the Career section thus turning it into Bio section. An article doesn't have to have so many sections. I believe sections should be used for significant events or situations in a person's life. For example the Biography should cover practical incidents, while sections should cover special events like, if OK-bin became a singer that would be sectioned off because her primary job is acting, or if she is a president to a major charity company.

Trivia I will remove cause it goes against wiki policy. I will integrate it into the content.

In The Media doesn't match the content below. Criticism seems more precise. I didn't put Controversy that's Refsworldlee's edit edit

As for the table under Filmography the dramas are mixed up with the films and you tell what is which. And such short film section doesn't require a table.

Gallery willbe removed you are right. Be lov 20:03, 20 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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 Reverting these changes does not constitute "vandalism" as they are contrary to policy and MOS guidelines. Please discuss before continuing to restore this content to the article. [[User:PC78|PC78]] ([[User talk:PC78|talk]]) 19:45, 20 November 2009 (UTC)
+==My edits==
+The sections of the article weren't adequate. Martial arts was only 1 sentence and could have been placed in with the Career section thus turning it into Bio section. An article doesn't have to have so many sections. I believe sections should be used for significant events or situations in a person's life. For example the Biography should cover practical incidents, while sections should cover special events like, if OK-bin became a singer that would be sectioned off because her primary job is acting, or if she is a president to a major charity company.
+Trivia I will remove cause it goes against wiki policy. I will integrate it into the content.
+In The Media doesn't match the content below. Criticism seems more precise.
+I didn't put Controversy that's Refsworldlee's edit [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Kim_Ok-bin&action=historysubmit&diff=187031142&oldid=187023235 edit]
+As for the table under Filmography the dramas are mixed up with the films and you tell what is which. And such short film section doesn't require a table.
+Gallery willbe removed you are right. '''[[User:Belov |<font color="#9E9E9E" size="3pt" face="Comic Sans ms">Be</font>]][[User talk:Belov |<font color="#000000">lov</font>]]''' 20:03, 20 November 2009 (UTC)