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Revision as of 21:12, 2 December 2009
Aiden Ford has been listed as one of the good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: December 2, 2009. |
This article was nominated for deletion on 1 September 2006. The result of the discussion was Keep. |
- Ford was the best character on Stargate Atlantis Season 1. It was a pity to see him leave Atlantis in Season 2. I hope he will come back in Season 3.
- I agree with you. Ford was a good character. Maybe Ford will make a comeback into the series in future seasons to come, or maybe he won't. Eitherway, its up to the producers and directors and crew to see if Ford should make a comeback into the series. Personally, I hope he does return. At least, in order to provide closure to the character itself, even if it means killing him off, or something else. --Ned Talamoa (talk) 10:45, 7 January 2008 (UTC)
- Regardless of whether or not anyone here personally agrees with you, please note that talk pages are for discussions on how to develop the article and are not a message board for the subject(s) of said article. Thanks! -- Joe Beaudoin Jr. Think out loud — WP:PORN BIO? 00:29, 22 July 2006 (UTC)
Season 5 cameo
I know it's true, I know a lot of people have seen it, but I can't find any sources to verify it. When you find one, please add it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Richard Jackson (talk • contribs) 16:08, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
I added a link to IMdB's credit listing for that episode. Hopefully that's good enough. 209.6.19.88 (talk) 15:32, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
- When I cited IMdB on a different page, User:Addhoc reverted it. We'll just have to hope he doesn't find out. --Ye Olde Luke (talk) 19:53, 5 January 2009 (UTC)
GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Aiden Ford/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Sanguis Sanies (talk) 14:35, 26 November 2009 (UTC)
Greetings! I've previously reviewed Jeffrey Spender and as there is a rather large backlog under Film and Television I thought I'd help out and review some more.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Lead/Infobox
No major problems that I can see.
Character arc
Done "The only family that Ford mentions are his grandparents." Then why does the infobox mention a cousin?
Done "Ford is diagnosed to have suruvived an overdose of addictive" rewrite and spelling.
Done CITEs two and three should be moved to their respective claims.
Done "Pegasus galaxy to harvest their enzyme that would give him super-human strength." needs a rewrite, also I'm seem to remember he needed the enzyme (in the sense that he was addicted) am I remembering correctly?
Done "The Wraith-enzyme allowed Ford to immediately rematerialize on-board a Wraith-hive ship," it did?
Done "help in destroying an entire Wraith Hive-ship," as opposed to part of one?
Conceptual History
Done Doesn't mention developing the character before the series started.
Done "Ford had not worked as intended and was highly underused as a result." needs a CITE.
Done Sentence 4 and 5 both need CITEs.
Done "they had reduced Ford to a recurring character in the series." Can the announcement saying this be found.
Done "never fully developed compared to the other characters in the show" needs a CITE, also "many fans" which ones and where?
Done "Many campaigns to save the character were created after the announcement." a few examples would be nice.
Done "since he and Brad Wright had already discussed the change." needs a CITE.
Reception
Bit on the small side and only seems to focus on his "Bring back" campaign, which whilst important, doesn't really tell us why people wanted him back. Does "F.O.R.D." still exist somewhere?
- Not done I can't seem to find anything else!
- That should be okay, a minor character that only existed for one season. Should be fine as-is. Sanguis Sanies (talk) 21:17, 26 November 2009 (UTC)
- Not done I can't seem to find anything else!
References
Done As with the other GA reviews I've done a simple rewrite on the "credits=" parameter is needed.
Done CITE 8, 10 and 11 need to have publication dates added "date="
Doneall the weblinks check out so no problems there.