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Rediret

"Home Security" links here. It needs it's own article though. Home Security and Burglar Alarms are not similar enough to have an ambiguation link.

Sources are outdated. This article needs updating.

The sources quoted and the information contained in this article are far outdated and should be updated immediately.

Sources

The following source is not link spam:

Bulldog Security Services : Atlanta Home Security

Then what is it? -Will Beback 20:41, 30 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The source material. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.34.68.186 (talk) 00:35, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Broadband

Warrenlead (talk) 05:22, 12 April 2008 (UTC) The Section on Broadband is definitely outdated. There are new products out now that use Internet plus GPRS Mobile Broadband with fall back to PSTN. These systems out perform all current standards. see http://www.uhssystems.com/products.php[reply]

Original Research

There are a bunch of sections describing various types of alarm sensors that end with a conclusion section. This is blatant original research, and should be removed as per WP:SYN. -- Javawizard (talk) 05:09, 31 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Could you site some specific examples? I believe I can fix them (without deletion) if I knew what the specific contended sections are. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.34.68.186 (talk) 00:37, 27 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

unprofessional

"Burglar (or intrusion), fire, and safety alarms are all electronic today." The opening sounds like something from uncyclopedia. This whole article should be updated. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.27.58.80 (talk) 06:16, 17 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done, albeit belatedly, 92.236.88.188 (talk) 10:41, 20 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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+== Rediret ==
 "Home Security" links here.  It needs it's own article though.  Home Security and Burglar Alarms are not similar enough to have an ambiguation link.
 == Sources are outdated. This article needs updating. ==
 The sources quoted and the information contained in this article are far outdated and should be updated immediately.
-==Sources==
+== Sources ==
 The following source is not link spam:
 *[http://www.4bulldog.com Bulldog Security Services : Atlanta Home Security]
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 == Original Research ==
 There are a bunch of sections describing various types of alarm sensors that end with a conclusion section. This is blatant original research, and should be removed as per [[WP:SYN]]<nowiki>.</nowiki> [[User:Javawizard|-- Javawizard]] ([[User talk:Javawizard|talk]]) 05:09, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 :Could you site some specific examples? I believe I can fix them (without deletion) if I knew what the specific contended sections are.  <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/71.34.68.186|71.34.68.186]] ([[User talk:71.34.68.186|talk]]) 00:37, 27 March 2009 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
 == unprofessional ==
 "Burglar (or intrusion), fire, and safety alarms are all electronic today." The opening sounds like something from uncyclopedia. This whole article should be updated.  <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/89.27.58.80|89.27.58.80]] ([[User talk:89.27.58.80|talk]]) 06:16, 17 December 2008 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
 :Done, albeit belatedly, [[Special:Contributions/92.236.88.188|92.236.88.188]] ([[User talk:92.236.88.188|talk]]) 10:41, 20 April 2009 (UTC)