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#It is '''reasonably well written'''. |
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#:: '' [While recognized within the ranks of Nitzer Ebb, Ministry, and Skinny Puppy as pioneers in introducing industrial music to mainstream audiences, KMFDM describes their sound as "The Ultra-Heavy Beat".'' Surely recognized "along with"? |
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#::''...a fusion of electronic and heavy metal, with occasional elements of reggae, ska, and even rap.'' The word "even" conveys a point of view. |
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#::''KMFDM is not without a sense of humor, however.'' again this tends to convey a point of view. |
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#::''KMFDM has put on an album on average every year and a half, and usually tours at least once in support of each album.'' "put out", I think is meant here. |
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#::''KMFDM is an initialism for the nonsensical and grammatically incorrect German phrase "Kein Mehrheit Für Die Mitleid", ''. I think "acronym" is a better word to use here. |
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#It is '''factually accurate''' and '''[[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]]'''. |
#It is '''factually accurate''' and '''[[Wikipedia:Verifiability|verifiable]]'''. |
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#:: refs # 60 through 68 MySpace is not a [[WP:RS]]. See [[WP:Attribution/FAQ#Are IRC, MySpace, and YouTube reliable sources?]] |
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#:: ref #53 [http://www1.nrk.no/nett-tv/klipp/418313] is a dead link |
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#It is '''broad in its coverage'''. |
#It is '''broad in its coverage'''. |
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#It follows the '''[[WP:NPOV|neutral point of view]] policy'''. |
#It follows the '''[[WP:NPOV|neutral point of view]] policy'''. |
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#It is '''stable'''. |
#It is '''stable'''. |
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#It is illustrated by '''[[Wikipedia:Images|images]]''', where possible and appropriate. |
#It is illustrated by '''[[Wikipedia:Images|images]]''', where possible and appropriate. |
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#:OK, on hold fro seven days for above issues to be addressed. –– [[User:Jezhotwells|Jezhotwells]] ([[User talk:Jezhotwells|talk]]) 19:55, 7 April 2010 (UTC) |
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Revision as of 19:55, 7 April 2010
GA Review
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Reviewer: –– Jezhotwells (talk) 19:09, 7 April 2010 (UTC)
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I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.
Checking against GA criteria
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- KMFDM Records in the infobox redirects back to this article, KMFDM. A double redirect
- [While recognized within the ranks of Nitzer Ebb, Ministry, and Skinny Puppy as pioneers in introducing industrial music to mainstream audiences, KMFDM describes their sound as "The Ultra-Heavy Beat". Surely recognized "along with"?
- ...a fusion of electronic and heavy metal, with occasional elements of reggae, ska, and even rap. The word "even" conveys a point of view.
- KMFDM is not without a sense of humor, however. again this tends to convey a point of view.
- KMFDM has put on an album on average every year and a half, and usually tours at least once in support of each album. "put out", I think is meant here.
- KMFDM is an initialism for the nonsensical and grammatically incorrect German phrase "Kein Mehrheit Für Die Mitleid", . I think "acronym" is a better word to use here.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- refs # 60 through 68 MySpace is not a WP:RS. See WP:Attribution/FAQ#Are IRC, MySpace, and YouTube reliable sources?
- ref #53 [1] is a dead link
- All on-line references should be formatted consistently with publisher details and retrieval date.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- OK, on hold fro seven days for above issues to be addressed. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 19:55, 7 April 2010 (UTC)