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Because in this Articel so many Informations are missing or just wrong i had made some update , unfortunatly my english is not good enough for the english wikipedia. i hope some one can go trouh my writtings and put the articel about the swiss air force in the right way . I have the re written page below. the main sources are the official homepage of the Swiss air force (some pages there exist not in English ,only in german) |
Because in this Articel so many Informations are missing or just wrong i had made some update , unfortunatly my english is not good enough for the english wikipedia. i hope some one can go trouh my writtings and put the articel about the swiss air force in the right way . I have the re written page below. the main sources are the official homepage of the Swiss air force (some pages there exist not in English ,only in german) |
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==Mission== |
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In 1995 the Swiss abandoned traditional doctrine and implemented a defensive plan that made control of Swiss airspace its highest and main priority. Modernization of the Swiss Air Force to achieve this mission was subject to popular [[referendum|referenda]] challenging its cost and practice.<ref name=Present /> |
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The missions of the Swiss Air Force are as follows:<ref name=Present /> |
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*Protecting Switzerland’s airspace. |
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**Guaranteeing air sovereignty (including air policing tasks). |
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*Guaranteeing air defence. |
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*Carrying out air transport operations. |
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*Gathering and disseminating intelligence for political and military leadership. |
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== Inventory == |
== Inventory == |
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I have some additional information about the SAF:
1. there were only 62 Mirage III/S/RS 2. the F-5E/F Fighters are still in operateion, but there was a significant reduction from over 100 to about 58 and some of them are leased to the Austrian Air Force
The Air Defence branch of the Swiss Armed Forces are also a part of the Swiss Air Force, operation three air defence systems:
- FIM-92 Stinger MANPADS light Air Defense - BAe Rapier Mk. 2 SAM - 35 mm Oerlikon Skyguard air defence artillery system
Thank you for your attention, don't hasitade to ask for more. Greetings
Merging
Couldn't this be moved to Military of Switzerland?--The4sword 23:09, 16 May 2007 (UTC)
Logo
| This is fake then, correct? vlad§inger tlk 15:56, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
Consistent
the article isn't consistent in tone. the summary is not all that conlusive. it leaves a gap of information in between the first and second paragraphs. improving the summary may do the trick. Freshymail-user_talk:fngosa--the-knowledge-defender 23:03, 22 September 2009 (UTC)
GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Swiss Air Force/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Dana boomer (talk) 17:35, 30 October 2009 (UTC)
Hi! I will be reviewing this article for GA status, and should have the full review up shortly. Dana boomer (talk) 17:35, 30 October 2009 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- In the lead it says that there are eight bases, then only lists seven, as far as I can see.
- The second paragraph of the lead contains information that is not included in the article, which violates the main principle of a summary lead. Also, why is Payerne the most important air base?
- The Air Defence section says "The high level air defence of the Swiss national airspace is the responsibility of the FLORAKO". I'm not really seeing what this is trying to say.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- I'm concerned that the image of the Eurocopter Dauphin doesn't have correct licensing. The tag is discussing free software, rather than an image.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Overall a nice article, but a few things with prose, MOS and images to be dealt with. These issues should be easy to fix, and the article should be able to be of GA status within a short time. Please let me know if you have any questions! Dana boomer (talk) 17:55, 30 October 2009 (UTC)
- Due to the lack of work on the article (no edits have been made since I conducted the above review) I am failing this article's GA nomination. Once the work detailed above has been completed, the article may be renominated for GAN, and should pass with flying colors! Dana boomer (talk) 21:11, 6 November 2009 (UTC)
Source incomplete!
The source 7 is incomplete, stating only "Lombardi, p.40–41." Is this a book? If it is, please provide the full information (at least author and title, possibly more). Furthermore, I think the corresponding paragraph should be verified again. Greeting from Basel, Switzerland.81.62.210.240 (talk) 00:18, 2 January 2010 (UTC)
Much missing Informations, Much Wrong Informations
Many Air Bases are missing (Lodrino, Buochs,..), aircraft typs are missing (PC-12) Wrong numbers (F-5E, AlouetteIII). Outpasst Typs and Bases Are missing. Wrong informations: Bern is a civil Airport, F-5E are still in use as Fighter, PC-9 is also used for ECM ...... —Preceding unsigned comment added by Swisstestpilot (talk • contribs) 09:34, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the information. Can you point us to reliable published sources that we can use as a basis for correcting these error? Sandstein 09:48, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
http://www.lw.admin.ch/internet/luftwaffe/en/home/dokumentation/assets/aircraft.html
http://www.lw.admin.ch/internet/luftwaffe/en/home/verbaende/einsatz_lw.html
Well the Air Force Page is not 100% up to date talking from 13 Alouette in April, there are at end of this Month only 8 left.
By the F-5E thy dont count the F-5E/F at Meiringen and the one who is a temporary exponat in the Trafficmusseum Lucerne because of the 100 year festival —Preceding unsigned comment added by Swisstestpilot (talk • contribs) 10:09, 9 April 2010 (UTC)
Because in this Articel so many Informations are missing or just wrong i had made some update , unfortunatly my english is not good enough for the english wikipedia. i hope some one can go trouh my writtings and put the articel about the swiss air force in the right way . I have the re written page below. the main sources are the official homepage of the Swiss air force (some pages there exist not in English ,only in german)
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