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In my point of view the articel is writen neutrally. If you don't agree, please let me know which part isn't neutral.23matthias (talk) 13:02, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It's the overall tone of the article. It's written like a promotional flyer for the event and not an encyclopedia article about it. —C.Fred (talk) 13:05, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Note for editors: the article in its current text was speedy deleted as spam in February under the title Eu'Vend. —C.Fred (talk) 13:09, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I understood the the old article from February was to much in the tone of a promotional flyer. That's why I tried to merely summarize factual information. That's why I nearly used no adjectives. I agree that there are still some adjectives in the History part. Would the article be fine, if I rewrite this part? 23matthias (talk) 13:25, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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	:Note for editors: the article in its current text was speedy deleted as spam in February under the title [[Eu'Vend]]. —'''[[User:C.Fred\|C.Fred]]''' ([[User_talk:C.Fred\|talk]]) 13:09, 15 July 2010 (UTC)		:Note for editors: the article in its current text was speedy deleted as spam in February under the title [[Eu'Vend]]. —'''[[User:C.Fred\|C.Fred]]''' ([[User_talk:C.Fred\|talk]]) 13:09, 15 July 2010 (UTC)

			I understood the the old article from February was to much in the tone of a promotional flyer. That's why I tried to merely summarize factual information. That's why I nearly used no adjectives. I agree that there are still some adjectives in the History part. Would the article be fine, if I rewrite this part? [[User:23matthias\|23matthias]] ([[User talk:23matthias\|talk]]) 13:25, 15 July 2010 (UTC)