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updating website that relates to our own company Australian Securities Exchange

Hi, we want to improve the information relating to our company website by deleting invalid sections, putting in most recent data. This is not from a marketing point of view but making it accurate. When I try and delete entire old sections it won't let me and I get a warning. I can't find out how I can do a large update to the content. Please help

Lawson m (talk) 00:28, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

There is a problem with adding promotional material to this article, especially if you have a conflict of interest. I've requested on your talk page to please discuss the addition of any material, especially material that can be considered promotional or from its original source, either at the article's talk page or at WP:FINANCE, first. Thank you, --Funandtrvl (talk) 00:45, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Haimericus/McGarvey

J. W. McGarvey was a leading minister, educator, and writer in the American Restoration Movement (Disciples of Christ, Christian Churches, Churches of Christ) from the 1860s to the turn of the 20th century. His Bible commentaries and topical works are still very influential among the conservative adherents of this persuasion. He was also a pivotal figure in the controversies that led to the division between these groups.

I'm new at Wikipedia writing and would appreciate any help to make this article better. Haimericus (talk) 02:47, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

Very good, but the references are intended to act as the bibliography and notes and sources - you can use them like this...

References

Take a statement or paragraph the reference supports. Wikipedia has a main page. Fill out one of these for it {{cite book |title= |last= |first= |publisher= |isbn= |pages= |accessdate=}} {{cite web |url= |title= |author= |publisher= |accessdate=}} Put <ref> and </ref> around it and you have... Wikipedia has a main page.<ref>{{cite web |url=http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Main_Page|title=Main Page of Wikipedia|author=Wikipedians|publisher=Wikimedia Foundation|accessdate=2010 August 27}}</ref> (which makes the following) Wikipedia has a main page. the referneces will appear, formatted, in the references section, where you have a {{Reflist}} as seen below:

Also, make sure to keep a disinterested tone and links to outside of Wikipedia are like this...

• [URL TO WEBPAGE what text shows]

1. example:

• [http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Requests_for_feedback/2010_August_27&action=edit&section=2 Reply To This When You're done reading]

1. which makes...

• Reply To This When You're done reading

Hope that helps! ~ QwerpQwertus Talk ツ 03:34, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vijaymgdg/Pdt.Rajguru_Guruswami_Kalikeri

Please help me out with any suggestions.This articale about a great Indian Classical Vocalst Pdt.Rajguru Guruswami Kalikeri. He is a well known writer also in Kannada literature, the article gives all the details of his life work and contributions. Awards: Won Karnataka State government prestigeous award in the year 2003. Hundredrs of awards from many more institutions. Sources: www.rgkalikeri.com http://www.sangeethamusic.com/index.php?m=ud&action=viewcapgm&id=2&sid=16&pid=4239 http://www.manoramic.com/ http://www.raaga.com/channels/kannada/singers/Guruswamy+Kalikeri.html www.muzigle.com/album/thatva_padagalu

Vijaymgdg (talk) 06:45, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

MLE (Multi-Lamellar Emulsion) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/MLE_(Multi-Lamellar_Emulsion)

Please feel free to advise me on this article. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/MLE_(Multi-Lamellar_Emulsion)

Thank you!

Sanghwa1112 (talk) 08:38, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/MIT_Institute_Of_Design

220.225.105.180 (talk) 09:18, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Answerfindyours/MikeCi

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Answerfindyours/MikeCi I hope I've met the criteria!

Answerfindyours (talk) 11:05, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PollJoNHS/Antony_Sumara

It would be useful if someone could post this article.

PollJoNHS (talk) 11:54, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

Ngo Fractal

Hi! Just want to check if anything else needs to be done on this article! 212.200.157.166 (talk) 12:06, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

Death with Dignity National Center

I finished this article and moved it out of my workspace earlier this month. Any additional thoughts for clean-up? Thanks!

Melissathebarber (talk) 15:42, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Coats_Funeral_Home

Please review the Wiki I have created for Coats Funeral Home- one of the oldest funeral homes in the Metro Detroit area.

Thanks for you help- any feedback is welcome!

Weesiesj (talk) 18:19, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Professional_Petroleum_Data_Management_Association

I wrote this article for my global work community. I would like a review to ensure it meets all of wikipedia's standards.

DHoodPPDM (talk) 19:12, 27 August 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Junjoon/Xeltek_inc.#External_links%7C

I have created a new article and would like to have it reviewed to see if it passes wiki regulations so that I can post it. Thanks in advance

Junjoon (talk) 20:15, 27 August 2010 (UTC)