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I'll review this over the next couple days. [[User:Wizardman|<span style="color:#030">'''''Wizardman'''''</span>]] <sub>[[User:Wizardman/Operation Big Bear|<span style="color:#600">Operation Big Bear</span>]]</sub> 05:05, 17 October 2010 (UTC)
I'll review this over the next couple days. [[User:Wizardman|<span style="color:#030">'''''Wizardman'''''</span>]] <sub>[[User:Wizardman/Operation Big Bear|<span style="color:#600">Operation Big Bear</span>]]</sub> 05:05, 17 October 2010 (UTC)

Couple = five I guess. Anyway, here's the review:
*"The series went the full three games but the Braves found themselves on the road for Game 3." since when were there three-game playoff series? Or maybe this was a temporary change in the rules for that season. If so then this can be omitted.
*"The season culminated with Ramsay not being rehired." Noted in the previous paragraph, so redundant.
*"After 4 games, the series was even at 2 wins each. Once again the Celtics would take the series in 6 games." Write out #s.
*Not much in the march-april section basketball-wise. Anything else of note? I presume not else it would already be in there.
*Is the notes column in the schedule necessary, since it's not being used?
*The playoff schedule is a bit messed up; the OT mark is creating an extra column.

A better article, not as many issues. Article on hold, will pass when fixed. [[User:Wizardman|<span style="color:#030">'''''Wizardman'''''</span>]] <sub>[[User:Wizardman/Operation Big Bear|<span style="color:#600">Operation Big Bear</span>]]</sub> 22:09, 21 October 2010 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:05, 17 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this over the next couple days. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:05, 17 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Couple = five I guess. Anyway, here's the review:

  • "The series went the full three games but the Braves found themselves on the road for Game 3." since when were there three-game playoff series? Or maybe this was a temporary change in the rules for that season. If so then this can be omitted.
  • "The season culminated with Ramsay not being rehired." Noted in the previous paragraph, so redundant.
  • "After 4 games, the series was even at 2 wins each. Once again the Celtics would take the series in 6 games." Write out #s.
  • Not much in the march-april section basketball-wise. Anything else of note? I presume not else it would already be in there.
  • Is the notes column in the schedule necessary, since it's not being used?
  • The playoff schedule is a bit messed up; the OT mark is creating an extra column.

A better article, not as many issues. Article on hold, will pass when fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 22:09, 21 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]