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== Rica Takashima == |
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I have added noted manga artist Rica Takashima, including links to major review sites, as well as citations within Wikipedia. |
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Revision as of 22:27, 11 December 2010
This article is a biography of author Marjorie Holmes (deceased). Please review and provide feedback. Thank you in advance.
PurrS | (talk) 03:11, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
- I think it's a good start; I can't see any immediate problems. Nice job! Chevymontecarlo 07:33, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
Hello, This is my first article and I am looking for confirmation of whether this is an article I am permitted to write, given possible conflict of interest. It isn't finished, so I don't (yet) need help with content or style. The article is a list of distributed social network applications, comparing things like features and license, so I don't think point of view should be a problem, but I'd like to be sure. Please see my user page for more details.
Gravthuth (talk) 03:39, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
- It's good but try and add some links and references perhaps. Chevymontecarlo 07:34, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you. Yes, I will! Gravthuth (talk) 10:49, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
Just would like someone to review so as to remove the little header thing. Thanks!
Gahbay (talk) 07:54, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
Why will this article not appear upon search? Can someone fix up some of the references please?
Joseph Costas (talk) 08:47, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amberley_lobo Hi guys I was wondering if I could get some feedback on this article. It is my first so any pointers would be awesome. Also could I get some advice on how to get it posted on the site. Cheers Brooke.
Hi Guys,
I was just wondering if I could get your feedback on this article. It's my first so any tips are welcome. Also, how do I post it live.
Cheers, have a good one.
Brooke
Gerrickbrooke (talk) 09:28, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
Please check the content on the page that I have created. Please feel free to edit or remove any content which you feel is inappropriate and might violate your terms of policy. Please feel free to contact me or mail me.
Regards, Harsh harsh@harshkashiparekh.com
Harshkashiparekh (talk) 09:39, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
Looking for help copy editing, and other thoughts on what can be placed for this article. This is about a current ongoing criminal case for a series of bank robberies in Southern California that has made national news. Thank you for any help anyone can offer.
Jsgoodrich (talk) 10:33, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
PT Gases
Is this one good to go?
FactLover1000 (talk) 17:22, 11 December 2010 (UTC)FactLover1000
User:Muymalestado/Tain_%26_District_Field_Club
Revised entry: please review. Thank you.
Muymalestado (talk) 18:11, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
User:Shaazam19/Avery Brewing Company
Hey! I recently started a wikipedia account and needed help moving an article about a craft brewery in Boulder, Colorado called Avery Brewing Company from my user space to live space. I received some help in effort to better my article and I believe I fulfilled all the requirements. Could someone please help me move it to live space or let me know if there is anything else I have to do?
thank you!
Shaazam19 (talk) 20:33, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
This is about historical Mexian American archaeology
Stxarchaeo (talk) 20:37, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
HElp! This is my first article and i need help. Can some one give me any ideas for more categories and how do i add an image into the information box? The box with the principal, coordinates, etc. Help Please!
-PsiΨ (talk) 20:40, 11 December 2010 (UTC)
Rica Takashima
I have added noted manga artist Rica Takashima, including links to major review sites, as well as citations within Wikipedia. Sebastian122 (talk) 22:27, 11 December 2010 (UTC)