Talk:A Separation: Difference between revisions
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The last line of the plot makes no sense. "Razieh is found to not be guilty of the incident..." There is no previous mention of her being charged. It earlier refers only to Razieh's husband and Nader being charged. [[User:Tiddy|Tiddy]] ([[User talk:Tiddy|talk]]) 03:32, 21 February 2011 (UTC) |
The last line of the plot makes no sense. "Razieh is found to not be guilty of the incident..." There is no previous mention of her being charged. It earlier refers only to Razieh's husband and Nader being charged. [[User:Tiddy|Tiddy]] ([[User talk:Tiddy|talk]]) 03:32, 21 February 2011 (UTC) |
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:Have you seen the film? I added the plot section, but I only based it on the one on German Wikipedia so I'm just as confused. Would be appreciated if someone who actually has seen the movie could go through the plot and adjust it. Right now there are lots of |
:Have you seen the film? I added the plot section, but I only based it on the one on German Wikipedia so I'm just as confused. Would be appreciated if someone who actually has seen the movie could go through the plot and adjust it. Right now there are lots of details and emphasis that I'm not entirely comfortable with. [[User:Smetanahue|Smetanahue]] ([[User talk:Smetanahue|talk]]) 03:57, 21 February 2011 (UTC) |
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Hi Smet ! You'll have to excuse my imput, this is my first login on Wikipedia (a Wikivirgin, if you will). I agree with Tiddy that the last paragraph of the plot doesn't read rationally. While I appreciate your submission, may I make the suggestion that you just temporarily remove that part until you or someone else can re-add it more comprehensibly ? [[User:Roxannek|Roxannek]] ([[User talk:Roxannek|talk]]) 03:03, 22 February 2011 (UTC) |
Hi Smet ! You'll have to excuse my imput, this is my first login on Wikipedia (a Wikivirgin, if you will). I agree with Tiddy that the last paragraph of the plot doesn't read rationally. While I appreciate your submission, may I make the suggestion that you just temporarily remove that part until you or someone else can re-add it more comprehensibly ? [[User:Roxannek|Roxannek]] ([[User talk:Roxannek|talk]]) 03:03, 22 February 2011 (UTC) |
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Thanks both Smet & Roxannek. I haven't seen the film either but was interested in trying to understand the plot. [[Special:Contributions/121.217.158.197|121.217.158.197]] ([[User talk:121.217.158.197|talk]]) 05:14, 22 February 2011 (UTC) |
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This article contains a translation of Jodaeiye Nader az Simin from de.wikipedia. (414906166 et seq.) |
A news item involving A Separation was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the In the news section on 20 February 2011. |
Plot
The last line of the plot makes no sense. "Razieh is found to not be guilty of the incident..." There is no previous mention of her being charged. It earlier refers only to Razieh's husband and Nader being charged. Tiddy (talk) 03:32, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
- Have you seen the film? I added the plot section, but I only based it on the one on German Wikipedia so I'm just as confused. Would be appreciated if someone who actually has seen the movie could go through the plot and adjust it. Right now there are lots of details and emphasis that I'm not entirely comfortable with. Smetanahue (talk) 03:57, 21 February 2011 (UTC)
Hi Smet ! You'll have to excuse my imput, this is my first login on Wikipedia (a Wikivirgin, if you will). I agree with Tiddy that the last paragraph of the plot doesn't read rationally. While I appreciate your submission, may I make the suggestion that you just temporarily remove that part until you or someone else can re-add it more comprehensibly ? Roxannek (talk) 03:03, 22 February 2011 (UTC) Thanks both Smet & Roxannek. I haven't seen the film either but was interested in trying to understand the plot. 121.217.158.197 (talk) 05:14, 22 February 2011 (UTC)