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Needs better editing

Now I am not particularly fond of the way this article is written. It seems like a fanboy decided to disregard all rules of writing and made a post that oh-so-obviously gushed about the actress. No offence to the writer but this article is clearly not in neutral POV.

Since I'm not aware of Takeuchi-san's works (I'm more acquainted with manzai), I hope the next person to add more details on Takeuchi-san will be more careful about the editing to prevent non-neutral POV.

Pasonia (talk) 06:15, 5 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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+== Needs better editing ==
+Now I am not particularly fond of the way this article is written. It seems like a fanboy decided to disregard all rules of writing and made a post that oh-so-obviously gushed about the actress. No offence to the writer but this article is clearly not in neutral POV.
+Since I'm not aware of Takeuchi-san's works (I'm more acquainted with manzai), I hope the next person to add more details on Takeuchi-san will be more careful about the editing to prevent non-neutral POV.
+[[User:Pasonia|Pasonia]] ([[User talk:Pasonia|talk]]) 06:15, 5 March 2011 (UTC)