User talk:Bdgls

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Speedy deletion nomination of Ourinternet

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A tag has been placed on Ourinternet, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become an encyclopedia article. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Business for more information.

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Talkback

(I don't know for certain it is from you, but I think it is a reasonable guess.)

Hello, Bdgls. You have new messages at Sphilbrick's talk page.
Message added SPhilbrickT 12:15, 23 June 2011 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.

Feedback on User:Bdgls/Ourinternet

There are several examples of wording that are problematic:

• "The company is one of the leading providers" You can't say this without adequate sourcing, and even if you can find adequate sourcing, many editors (including myself) don't think it is appropriate wording. It is what the marketing department says, not an encyclopedia.
• "packed with advanced features" In a word, no. Not acceptable.
• "Next step forward" See above
• "carving out a new niche" See above
• "Our Internet cloud servers are a good alternative" Not acceptable with sourcing, and even then, not advisable.
• "without investing a fortune" This is advertising not encyclopedia phrasing --SPhilbrickT 12:44, 23 June 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for your feedback. Will try to fix that leaving only facts and related sourcing.

Bdgls (talk) 13:12, 23 June 2011 (UTC)