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There is no need to use swear words in this context, this article does require some ammount of clean up 92.18.212.137 (talk) 16:52, 30 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Cleanup is needed. Most of the build up section needs to be removed or rewritten. Christopher Connor (talk) 18:40, 30 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Christopher Connor then rewrite it you own. Im big time tired of people not having an acount and deleting and editing other peoples work. I mean, get out of here. You can edit the grammer, but dont delete any of my work. This it to (92.18.212.137) and 95.117.107.91. Create an account. Then you can edit as much as you want to,. — Preceding unsigned comment added by David-golota (talk • contribs) 19:37, 30 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I don't see why editing this article on an account makes any difference. I do have an account, but it's easier to stay logged off. I'm sorry to say that your "work" isn't up to Wikipedia's writing standards and requires a clean up. I will keep necessary infomation and references but the grammar is still poor and needs to be rewritten and rephrased. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 92.19.39.197 (talk) 19:17, 1 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Well excues me for wanting to get the article big and expanded and sorry that english it not my first language. — Preceding unsigned comment added by David-golota (talk • contribs) 21:48, 1 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The article is perfectly big and looks very good. I understand now that English isn't your first language and you've done a good effort. I'll help with the grammar. 92.19.38.50 (talk) 11:02, 2 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Inappropriate material in the "Build up" section

A lot of the text is written in very poor English. There seems to be a lot of odd information in this section that isn't appropriate for an encyclopedia. A couple of examples are:

"Haye also said that the trash talk was over and that it was down to business, which was also one of the reasons why he didn’t bring his infamous t-shirt, with him holding the decapitated heads of the Klitschko brothers."

"A pre-fight news conference was held on June 27 in Hamburg. No new things were said. David Haye got up and said that Wladimir was like a robot, that would mal-function on Saturday (fight night). He said he was happy the fight was happening now, because he is just a much better fighter now. He also said that he would show a totally new gameplan and he would not fight like he has done in his other fights."

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 ::Well excues me for wanting to get the article big and expanded and sorry that english it not my first language.  <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:David-golota|David-golota]] ([[User talk:David-golota|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/David-golota|contribs]]) 21:48, 1 July 2011 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
 :::The article is perfectly big and looks very good. I understand now that English isn't your first language and you've done a good effort. I'll help with the grammar. [[Special:Contributions/92.19.38.50|92.19.38.50]] ([[User talk:92.19.38.50|talk]]) 11:02, 2 July 2011 (UTC)
+== Inappropriate material in the "Build up" section ==
+A lot of the text is written in very poor English. There seems to be a lot of odd information in this section that [[WP:INDISCRIMINATE|isn't]] appropriate for an encyclopedia. A couple of examples are:
+"Haye also said that the trash talk was over and that it was down to business, which was also one of the reasons why he didn’t bring his infamous t-shirt, with him holding the decapitated heads of the Klitschko brothers."
+"A pre-fight news conference was held on June 27 in Hamburg. No new things were said. David Haye got up and said that Wladimir was like a robot, that would mal-function on Saturday (fight night). He said he was happy the fight was happening now, because he is just a much better fighter now. He also said that he would show a totally new gameplan and he would not fight like he has done in his other fights."