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==Reception==
==Reception==

Revision as of 18:52, 6 September 2011

Reception

The second paragraph mentions the reception but does not specify any sources. This should be looked into. Mordecairule 13:26, 2 August 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mordecairule (talkcontribs)

Leads don't have sources, they're summaries of the rest of the article. Read on to find the sources. --PresN 17:31, 2 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Gotcha, thanks for the help User:PresN! Mordecairule 18:08, 2 August 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mordecairule (talkcontribs) [reply]

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk contribs count) 17:57, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:57, 3 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

  • Keiichi Okabe could be linked if desired; not sure if there's enough on him or not for an article though so I'll leave that to your judgment.
  • "reaching a maximum position of 24 for the original soundtrack and 59 for the arranged album." not sure if 'maximum position' is the best ranking for language. Maybe just "reaching number 24.." or something like that.
Done. --PresN 05:46, 6 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • "studio MoNACA," you have the capitalization different in the usages throughout the article; keep them consistent.
  • "directed by Keiichi Okabe and including Kakeru Ishihama and Keigo Hoashi, and Takafumi Nishimura from Cavia, the game's developer." all the ands in this sentence are throwing me off. Maybe just make "It was also directed by Takafumi..." its own sentence.

I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:09, 4 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Addressed the above concerns. --PresN 05:46, 6 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 18:51, 6 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]