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This article has been revised as part of a large-scale clean-up project of multiple article copyright infringement. (See the investigation subpage) The article was created and has subsequently been expanded by a serial-copyright infringer under the accounts User:Siddiqui and User:AlphaGamma1991. Earlier text must not be restored, unless it can be verified to be free of infringement. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material; such additions must be deleted. Contributors may use sources as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences or phrases. Accordingly, the material may be rewritten, but only if it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 01:27, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

THIS PAGE IS CONTINUOUSLY BEING VANDALISED AND UNCITED MATERIAL IS BEING ADDED —Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.76.180.189 (talk) 11:41, 13 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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Prior content in this article duplicated one or more previously published sources. The material was copied from: http://www.pak-times.com/2009/05/14/a-self-made-jahangir-siddiqui-in-the-beginning/ and http://www.cssforum.com.pk/off-topic-section/humorous-inspirational-general-stuff/34072-success-story-business-giant-jahangir-sidiqqui-v-inspirational.html. Infringing material has been rewritten or removed and must not be restored, unless it is duly released under a compatible license. (For more information, please see "using copyrighted works from others" if you are not the copyright holder of this material, or "donating copyrighted materials" if you are.) For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or published material; such additions will be deleted. Contributors may use copyrighted publications as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences or phrases. Accordingly, the material may be rewritten, but only if it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously, and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. While we appreciate contributions, we must require all contributors to understand and comply with these policies. Thank you. Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 12:42, 22 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I have temporarily semi-protected this page do to repeated and long-term copyright problems and BLP issues. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 12:46, 22 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

How to improve this article

Given the persistent edit warring on this article; there are ways to improve it, particularly with neutral information. Taking a example like Citigroup, a lot of information can be added to this article such as:

History of the company - mergers, acquisitions, expansion, etc.
Organization - what holdings/companies/subsidiaries make JS Group?
Operations - where does JS Group operate? What do they do?
{{Infobox company}} - have important information accessible.

If any editors need help or have questions, let myself or another editor know.--NortyNort (Holla) 09:10, 4 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Adding detailed information about JS Group and its subsidiaries and their public relations activities

I want to add the details about the JS Bank, a subsidiary of JS Group and the Group's public relations activities. Allow me to make the improvements in this article. I made changes earlier but they were removed. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cheetah Khan (talk • contribs) 03:32, 19 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The information added is entirely too promotional and uncyclopedia. The article needs to be neutral in its tense and content.--NortyNort (Holla) 05:23, 19 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

promotional tone

Hey Haider, I think you should give some of the text another look on your recent changes. Some of the lead and other text sounds too promotional, like it came from the company website. Millahnna (talk) 16:17, 30 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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 I want to add the details about the JS Bank, a subsidiary of JS Group and the Group's public relations activities. Allow me to make the improvements in this article. I made changes earlier but they were removed.  <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Cheetah Khan|Cheetah Khan]] ([[User talk:Cheetah Khan|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Cheetah Khan|contribs]]) 03:32, 19 August 2011 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
 :The information added is entirely too [[WP:PROMOTION|promotional]] and uncyclopedia. The article needs to be [[WP:NPOV|neutral]] in its tense and content.--[[User:NortyNort|NortyNort]]  <small>[[User talk:NortyNort|(Holla)]]</small> 05:23, 19 August 2011 (UTC)
+== promotional tone ==
+Hey Haider, I think you should give some of the text another look on your recent changes.  Some of the lead and other text sounds too promotional, like it came from the company website.  [[User:Millahnna|Millahnna]] ([[User talk:Millahnna|talk]]) 16:17, 30 September 2011 (UTC)