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== Improvements ==
== Improvements ==
This article is supposed to show the history of Whitman along with how he progressed to become this famous scientist, and it is not. It must go into greater detail about how he became a scientist and his background history. This should be more of a bibliography and less like someone slapped on a couple of random facts. --[[User:Annmohh|Annmohh]] ([[User talk:Annmohh|talk]]) 23:20, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
This article is supposed to show the history of Whitman along with how he progressed to become this famous scientist, and it is not. It must go into greater detail about how he became a scientist and his background history. This should be more of a bibliography and less like someone slapped on a couple of random facts. --[[User:Annmohh|Annmohh]] ([[User talk:Annmohh|talk]]) 23:20, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

== Revisions ==
I edited this article by spelling out numbers when needed and fixing a minor spelling error.--[[User:Jessicaloyd27|Jessicaloyd27]] ([[User talk:Jessicaloyd27|talk]]) 22:10, 9 October 2011 (UTC)

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Improvements

This article is supposed to show the history of Whitman along with how he progressed to become this famous scientist, and it is not. It must go into greater detail about how he became a scientist and his background history. This should be more of a bibliography and less like someone slapped on a couple of random facts. --Annmohh (talk) 23:20, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Revisions

I edited this article by spelling out numbers when needed and fixing a minor spelling error.--Jessicaloyd27 (talk) 22:10, 9 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]