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In the first paragraph the word, “''despite'',” is used twice in the same sentence. Wouldn’t a slightly higher standard of grammatical expertise benefit the page? |
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Revision as of 18:23, 11 April 2006
It'd be great to have a photo of Jim Abbott pitching (given that with one arm he had such a distinctive style).
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• WikiWeakness #12 – contributions from a variety of authors are of varying degrees of rammatical competence and can create articles strewn with inconsistent style, spelling, punctuation, and syntax.
In the first paragraph the word, “despite,” is used twice in the same sentence. Wouldn’t a slightly higher standard of grammatical expertise benefit the page?
hello
i need to know about jim abbotts childhood