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Diagnosis

Pg179 diseases of the intestines Max Einhorn 2008 [1]

pg 158 American Gastroenterological Association technical review on hemorrhoids: The ASCRS textbook of colon and rectal surgery by Bruce G. Wolff, James W. Fleshman, David E. Beck. [2]

Differential

American Gastroenterological Association technical review on hemorrhoids: The ASCRS textbook of colon and rectal surgery by Bruce G. Wolff, James W. Fleshman, David E. Beck. [3]

Treatments

Nonprescription product therapeutics by W. Steven Pray pg 197-201 [4]

Mayo Clinic staff (18 March 2010). "Hemorrhoids". MayoClinic. http://www.mayoclinic.com/print/hemorrhoids/DS00096/DSECTION=all&METHOD=print. Retrieved 18 March 2010.

Surgical

Surgical treatment of hemorrhoids by Indru Khubchandani, Nina Paonessa, Khawaja Azimuddin discusses a variety of surgical techniques [5]

citation marked does not have accessible PDF: MacLeod JH (1982). "In defense of cryotherapy for hemorrhoids. A modified method". Dis. Colon Rectum 25 (4): 332–5. PMID 6979469.

pg 115 of Surgical treatment of hemorrhoids by Indru Khubchandani, Nina Paonessa, Khawaja Azimuddin discusses cryotherapy [6]

Definition/Usage

This article in its current state is schizophrenic regarding whether the term refers to "normal vascular structures" which are generally present in all healthy or unhealthy individuals, and which may in some cases "become pathological", but otherwise are unremarkable; or whether it refers to something that "occurs", having "symptoms" and "causes" when it does, and otherwise is not present and can be "prevented". If the cultural and/or professional usage is inconsistent, then the article should address and clarify that up front, and then adopt a consistent usage throughout. 134.134.137.71 (talk) 21:29, 24 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Technically hemorrhoids are normals parts of human anatomy which become pathological hemorrhoids when thrombosed. How do you wish the wording was improved?Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 22:17, 24 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi, I have noticed that among the procedures there is also mentioned the "Doppler-guided, transanal, hemorrhoidal dearterialization". Doing a little research I found this page here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transanal_hemorrhoidal_dearterialization where the procedure is described in more detail. I reckon it would help to link the 2 pages, the acronym (THD) of the procedure should be mentioned as well.

Sources (scientific journals): http://www.springerlink.com/content/mn363n1378j64343/

http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1111/j.1463-1318.2009.01915.x/abstract;jsessionid=7D66B5F93C8D9532FA135F8041E0BB04.d04t02

http://www.americanjournalofsurgery.com/article/S0002-9610%2801%2900759-0/abstract

Thanks!

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 This article in its current state is schizophrenic regarding whether the term refers to "normal vascular structures" which are generally present in all healthy or unhealthy individuals, and which may in some cases "become pathological", but otherwise are unremarkable; or whether it refers to something that "occurs", having "symptoms" and "causes" when it does, and otherwise is not present and can be "prevented".  If the cultural and/or professional usage is inconsistent, then the article should address and clarify that up front, and then adopt a consistent usage throughout. [[Special:Contributions/134.134.137.71|134.134.137.71]] ([[User talk:134.134.137.71|talk]]) 21:29, 24 November 2010 (UTC)
 ::Technically hemorrhoids are normals parts of human anatomy which become pathological hemorrhoids when thrombosed. How do you wish the wording was improved?[[User:Jmh649|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Jmh649|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Jmh649|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Jmh649|email]]) 22:17, 24 November 2010 (UTC)
+== Edit request on 7 March 2012 ==
+{{edit semi-protected|answered=no}}
+<!-- Begin request -->
+Hi,
+I have noticed that among the procedures there is also mentioned the "Doppler-guided, transanal, hemorrhoidal dearterialization". Doing a little research I found this page here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transanal_hemorrhoidal_dearterialization where the procedure is described in more detail. I reckon it would help to link the 2 pages, the acronym (THD) of the procedure should be mentioned as well.
+Sources (scientific journals):
+http://www.springerlink.com/content/mn363n1378j64343/
+http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1111/j.1463-1318.2009.01915.x/abstract;jsessionid=7D66B5F93C8D9532FA135F8041E0BB04.d04t02
+http://www.americanjournalofsurgery.com/article/S0002-9610%2801%2900759-0/abstract
+Thanks!
+<!-- End request -->
+[[User:Bookworm63|Bookworm63]] ([[User talk:Bookworm63|talk]]) 10:58, 7 March 2012 (UTC)