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I think you should talk more about why we need to conserve water, the goals were too general. I also think that we should also get more insight on what other places other than the U.K or U.S do to conserve water. Are there any world wide projects involved in water conservation? (examples). Maybe this can make the article more informative. Your contribution so far is relevant, I would like to know what else you plan on including in the article.[[User:Bmkitula|Bmkitula]] ([[User talk:Bmkitula|talk]]) 22:01, 23 March 2012 (UTC) |
I think you should talk more about why we need to conserve water, the goals were too general. I also think that we should also get more insight on what other places other than the U.K or U.S do to conserve water. Are there any world wide projects involved in water conservation? (examples). Maybe this can make the article more informative. The link you put should be in the reference,check the Wikipedia:Cheatsheet, this will help you with your citations. Your contribution so far is relevant, I would like to know what else you plan on including in the article.[[User:Bmkitula|Bmkitula]] ([[User talk:Bmkitula|talk]]) 22:01, 23 March 2012 (UTC) |
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Latest revision as of 22:04, 23 March 2012
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Retief_Goosen(Ncjones61 (talk) 20:41, 1 March 2012 (UTC))
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have a beer you drunk Ncjones61 (talk) 20:44, 1 March 2012 (UTC) |
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[edit]- Article could use a broader initial overview. - Article could use more headers and elaboration. - Overall looking good. — Preceding unsigned comment added by GSaundersLikeGlue (talk • contribs) 19:21, 20 March 2012 (UTC)
- You should complain to GSaunders - I haven't a clue what he is talking about. — RHaworth (talk · contribs) 12:25, 21 March 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]Please see this edit. We do not sign edits in the (article) namespace - the edit history shows what you have done. And why on earth was "reduce water consumption per capita" created as a wikilink? — RHaworth (talk · contribs) 12:25, 21 March 2012 (UTC)
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Ncjones61 (talk) 19:47, 22 March 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]I think you should talk more about why we need to conserve water, the goals were too general. I also think that we should also get more insight on what other places other than the U.K or U.S do to conserve water. Are there any world wide projects involved in water conservation? (examples). Maybe this can make the article more informative. The link you put should be in the reference,check the Wikipedia:Cheatsheet, this will help you with your citations. Your contribution so far is relevant, I would like to know what else you plan on including in the article.Bmkitula (talk) 22:01, 23 March 2012 (UTC)