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I stumbled across this article by chance and noticed that there was a lot of text that sounded like it was taken from the school's own pamphlets and point of view or that was, at best, uncited and vague - for instance, in the latter case, all the talk about opinions on the introduction of female students. Obviously, this would be a better article if it had cited, NPOV info on these matters, but, for the moment, I've excised the offending sections. [[Special:Contributions/128.135.207.112|128.135.207.112]] ([[User talk:128.135.207.112|talk]]) 20:43, 4 March 2009 (UTC) |
I stumbled across this article by chance and noticed that there was a lot of text that sounded like it was taken from the school's own pamphlets and point of view or that was, at best, uncited and vague - for instance, in the latter case, all the talk about opinions on the introduction of female students. Obviously, this would be a better article if it had cited, NPOV info on these matters, but, for the moment, I've excised the offending sections. [[Special:Contributions/128.135.207.112|128.135.207.112]] ([[User talk:128.135.207.112|talk]]) 20:43, 4 March 2009 (UTC) |
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This article looks like it was ripped from a school pamphlet, and if you look at the website listed, it largely is. Sentences such as "These things serve as a constant reminder of Father Ryan's rich history" and "Father Ryan High School is a college-preparatory secondary school with varied programs and courses designed to meet the individual needs and interests of '''our''' student population [''emphasis added'']" speak strongly to this.[[User:Coeus24|Coeus24]] ([[User talk:Coeus24|talk]]) 15:23, 11 July 2012 (UTC) |
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Nice start,More pics/text? Victuallers 12:09, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
Recent edit
I stumbled across this article by chance and noticed that there was a lot of text that sounded like it was taken from the school's own pamphlets and point of view or that was, at best, uncited and vague - for instance, in the latter case, all the talk about opinions on the introduction of female students. Obviously, this would be a better article if it had cited, NPOV info on these matters, but, for the moment, I've excised the offending sections. 128.135.207.112 (talk) 20:43, 4 March 2009 (UTC)
POV
This article looks like it was ripped from a school pamphlet, and if you look at the website listed, it largely is. Sentences such as "These things serve as a constant reminder of Father Ryan's rich history" and "Father Ryan High School is a college-preparatory secondary school with varied programs and courses designed to meet the individual needs and interests of our student population [emphasis added]" speak strongly to this.Coeus24 (talk) 15:23, 11 July 2012 (UTC)