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Before my edit the plot section was incomplete. It essentially described the opening of the novel and then had just a few sentences that abstracted the rest of the plot. I've fleshed it out a lot (perhaps a bit too much not sure). I've also provided references for an anecdote about Billy Wilder and moved that anecdote from the plot section to a background section which I also added. One thing to do is I don't currently have a copy of the book at hand. I'm going from memory but I've read the book several times and just re-read it a short time ago. The only thing is I can't remember the names of the doctor or the gangster so I've left them out for now but will add them as soon as I can get a copy of the book. [[User:Mdebellis|Mdebellis]] ([[User talk:Mdebellis|talk]]) 17:12, 11 July 2012 (UTC) |
Before my edit the plot section was incomplete. It essentially described the opening of the novel and then had just a few sentences that abstracted the rest of the plot. I've fleshed it out a lot (perhaps a bit too much not sure). I've also provided references for an anecdote about Billy Wilder and moved that anecdote from the plot section to a background section which I also added. One thing to do is I don't currently have a copy of the book at hand. I'm going from memory but I've read the book several times and just re-read it a short time ago. The only thing is I can't remember the names of the doctor or the gangster so I've left them out for now but will add them as soon as I can get a copy of the book. [[User:Mdebellis|Mdebellis]] ([[User talk:Mdebellis|talk]]) 17:12, 11 July 2012 (UTC) |
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I've made many changes to the page today. I'm done editing for the night but as I review I think I may have been too PC using "Ms" as opposed to "Miss". I think it might be more appropriate to use the language of the novel and the times. |
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BetacommandBot (talk) 17:31, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
Plot
Before my edit the plot section was incomplete. It essentially described the opening of the novel and then had just a few sentences that abstracted the rest of the plot. I've fleshed it out a lot (perhaps a bit too much not sure). I've also provided references for an anecdote about Billy Wilder and moved that anecdote from the plot section to a background section which I also added. One thing to do is I don't currently have a copy of the book at hand. I'm going from memory but I've read the book several times and just re-read it a short time ago. The only thing is I can't remember the names of the doctor or the gangster so I've left them out for now but will add them as soon as I can get a copy of the book. Mdebellis (talk) 17:12, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
change Ms. to Miss?
I've made many changes to the page today. I'm done editing for the night but as I review I think I may have been too PC using "Ms" as opposed to "Miss". I think it might be more appropriate to use the language of the novel and the times.