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::[[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] Interesting topic, I might watch it on the BBC player if I can get access--good job on creating the article. Unfortunately it is not yet long enough for a DYK, articles must be at least 1,500 words long; ''Nature's Microworlds'' is 287. The article meets content policies but the prose could be straightened out a little and I feel the article would be shorter still after that. We can work on making the hook at little sharper if the article is expanded in the next few days. Thanks again for sharing the knowledge and best of luck with the article!! Let me know if you'd like any help. Best, --[[User:Ktlynch|Ktlynch]] ([[User talk:Ktlynch|talk]]) 05:25, 27 August 2012 (UTC) |
::[[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] Interesting topic, I might watch it on the BBC player if I can get access--good job on creating the article. Unfortunately it is not yet long enough for a DYK, articles must be at least 1,500 words long; ''Nature's Microworlds'' is 287. The article meets content policies but the prose could be straightened out a little and I feel the article would be shorter still after that. We can work on making the hook at little sharper if the article is expanded in the next few days. Thanks again for sharing the knowledge and best of luck with the article!! Let me know if you'd like any help. Best, --[[User:Ktlynch|Ktlynch]] ([[User talk:Ktlynch|talk]]) 05:25, 27 August 2012 (UTC) |
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:::DYK articles must be 1,500 ''characters'' long, not 1,500 words.--'''[[User:So God created Manchester|SGCM]]''' [[User talk:So God created Manchester|<font color="orange">(''talk'')</font>]] 06:14, 27 August 2012 (UTC) |
:::DYK articles must be 1,500 ''characters'' long, not 1,500 words.--'''[[User:So God created Manchester|SGCM]]''' [[User talk:So God created Manchester|<font color="orange">(''talk'')</font>]] 06:14, 27 August 2012 (UTC) |
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::::Oops! Apologies, I misread. The article is then fine, I gave it a light copyedit. CAn I suggest a shortening of the hook? Maybe, "...that the BBC documentary '''''[[Nature's Microworlds]]''''' covers the wildlife of [[microclimate]]s ranging from the [[Serengeti]] grasslands in Africa to the [[Arctic]] archipelago of [[Svalbard]]?" Best, --[[User:Ktlynch|Ktlynch]] ([[User talk:Ktlynch|talk]]) 06:32, 27 August 2012 (UTC) |
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Nature's Microworlds
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- ... that BBC nature documentary series Nature's Microworlds covers the wildlife of microclimates ranging from the grasslands of the Serengeti in Africa to the Arctic archipelago of Svalbard?
- Reviewed: Lebanoraphidia, Iberoraphidia
Created/expanded by So God created Manchester (talk). Self nom at 21:27, 25 August 2012 (UTC)
Interesting topic, I might watch it on the BBC player if I can get access--good job on creating the article. Unfortunately it is not yet long enough for a DYK, articles must be at least 1,500 words long; Nature's Microworlds is 287. The article meets content policies but the prose could be straightened out a little and I feel the article would be shorter still after that. We can work on making the hook at little sharper if the article is expanded in the next few days. Thanks again for sharing the knowledge and best of luck with the article!! Let me know if you'd like any help. Best, --Ktlynch (talk) 05:25, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
- DYK articles must be 1,500 characters long, not 1,500 words.--SGCM (talk) 06:14, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
- Oops! Apologies, I misread. The article is then fine, I gave it a light copyedit. CAn I suggest a shortening of the hook? Maybe, "...that the BBC documentary Nature's Microworlds covers the wildlife of microclimates ranging from the Serengeti grasslands in Africa to the Arctic archipelago of Svalbard?" Best, --Ktlynch (talk) 06:32, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
- DYK articles must be 1,500 characters long, not 1,500 words.--SGCM (talk) 06:14, 27 August 2012 (UTC)
