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:It is not just conservative critics who say negative things about the book, it is highly respected historians.
:It is not just conservative critics who say negative things about the book, it is highly respected historians.
:I have recast that particular paragraph, abiding by the guideline at [[WP:LEAD]]. I think you will like it better. [[User:Binksternet|Binksternet]] ([[User talk:Binksternet#top|talk]]) 05:21, 6 November 2012 (UTC)
:I have recast that particular paragraph, abiding by the guideline at [[WP:LEAD]]. I think you will like it better. [[User:Binksternet|Binksternet]] ([[User talk:Binksternet#top|talk]]) 05:21, 6 November 2012 (UTC)


:: Thank you very much. Your edit is excellent. Do you think you could come up with a better way to phrase the sentence before that? "Reviewers on the left have called it brilliant, moving, and a great tool for moving forward the cause of social activism through the teaching of history through the prism of class consciousness." The phrase "reviewers on the left" seems inappropriate for similar reasons for your change to the sentence that had succeeded it before your edit. There are certainly many respected historians who both support and detract from the book. The sentence in general also seems to be similarly biased, especially words such as "brilliant" and "moving." Indeed, a better idea might be to just scrap both sentences, and just put in a sentence stating that the book has been polarizing, especially as the critical reception section has a large quantity of quotes giving any perspectives in which a reader might be interested. [[Special:Contributions/74.96.75.228|74.96.75.228]] ([[User talk:74.96.75.228|talk]]) 05:35, 6 November 2012 (UTC)

:: Also, I thought I should mention, since you felt the need to say something about reverting, that I was not reverting, but actually changing to different phrases each time, to try to find a better solution. You were the one reverting, and I think it is important that we all hold ourselves to the same standards. Thank you, and I appreciate your help [[Special:Contributions/74.96.75.228|74.96.75.228]] ([[User talk:74.96.75.228|talk]]) 05:35, 6 November 2012 (UTC)

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