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Hi John! Your article is really interesting. My suggestions would be to start with the legislation being enacted and follow it's path from introduction through signing. Then putting what you have as your first paragraph after all that. Also, your paragraph listing the purpose of the law has some spelling and grammatical errors. Hope this helps. Coharris (talk) 23:32, 12 April 2013 (UTC)Coharris[reply]

I am not sure about this at all. Coharris (talk) 23:28, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

EWA #1

2CurlyBoys (talk) 20:26, 29 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Me too. Thanks. Steve Lillard Regulator 3A (talk) 20:24, 30 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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I saw your request at Kayz911, and I made that edit and take a look at WP:Refname. Since this as my favor to you, would you please pay it forward? By the way, what class are you in? Best wishes. Biosthmors (talk) 15:36, 10 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Is one one of the ones listed at Special:Courses, for example? I've been helping out a few of those classes, particularly the Signal Transduction one. Best. Biosthmors (talk) 15:37, 10 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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			Hi John! Your article is really interesting. My suggestions would be to start with the legislation being enacted and follow it's path from introduction through signing. Then putting what you have as your first paragraph after all that. Also, your paragraph listing the purpose of the law has some spelling and grammatical errors. Hope this helps. [[User:Coharris\|Coharris]] ([[User talk:Coharris\|talk]]) 23:32, 12 April 2013 (UTC)Coharris


	I am not sure about this at all. [[User:Coharris\|Coharris]] ([[User talk:Coharris\|talk]]) 23:28, 30 January 2013 (UTC)		I am not sure about this at all. [[User:Coharris\|Coharris]] ([[User talk:Coharris\|talk]]) 23:28, 30 January 2013 (UTC)