User talk:Prlaud: Difference between revisions
Content deleted Content added
←Created page with '".... it is difficult to determine exactly where they inhabit because of their similarity with the P. alcon.[3] They are thought to be concentrated in the Alps a...' |
mNo edit summary |
||
| Line 1: | Line 1: | ||
".... it is difficult to determine exactly where they inhabit because of their similarity with the P. alcon.[3] They are thought to be concentrated in the Alps and in Southern Europe." would read better as ".... It is difficult to precisely pinpoint their habitat because of their similarity with P. alcon."[[User:Prlaud|Prlaud]] ([[User talk:Prlaud#top|talk]]) 16:23, 23 October 2013 (UTC) |
".... it is difficult to determine exactly where they inhabit because of their similarity with the P. alcon.[3] They are thought to be concentrated in the Alps and in Southern Europe." would read better as ".... It is difficult to precisely pinpoint their habitat because of their similarity with P. alcon."[[User:Prlaud|Prlaud]] ([[User talk:Prlaud#top|talk]]) 16:23, 23 October 2013 (UTC) |
||
References 12,13 are the same, a link to a website by an individual. A reference that is a published article from a journal would generally be preferred. Can you look into this?[[User:Prlaud|Prlaud]] ([[User talk:Prlaud#top|talk]]) 17:30, 23 October 2013 (UTC) |
|||
Revision as of 17:30, 23 October 2013
".... it is difficult to determine exactly where they inhabit because of their similarity with the P. alcon.[3] They are thought to be concentrated in the Alps and in Southern Europe." would read better as ".... It is difficult to precisely pinpoint their habitat because of their similarity with P. alcon."Prlaud (talk) 16:23, 23 October 2013 (UTC)
References 12,13 are the same, a link to a website by an individual. A reference that is a published article from a journal would generally be preferred. Can you look into this?Prlaud (talk) 17:30, 23 October 2013 (UTC)