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:* '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Vera Bogdanovskaia]]''' ''(pictured)'' died in the laboratory her husband had given her as a wedding present |
:* '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Vera Bogdanovskaia]]''' ''(pictured)'' died in the laboratory her husband had given her as a wedding present? |
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Irene Greif|QPQ done - Irene Greif]] |
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<small>5x expanded by Aciram and [[User:Victuallers|Victuallers]] ([[User talk:Victuallers|talk]]). Self nominated at 08:40, 22 April 2014 (UTC)</small>. |
<small>5x expanded by Aciram and [[User:Victuallers|Victuallers]] ([[User talk:Victuallers|talk]]). Self nominated at 08:40, 22 April 2014 (UTC)</small>. |
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:[[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] According to DYK check, the article is 342 characters short of being a x5 expansion. It's a shame because, in my opinion, this is exactly the kind of article that needs to be expanded and DYK should feature, so I hope you can get this one on the front page. |
:[[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] According to DYK check, the article is 342 characters short of being a x5 expansion. It's a shame because, in my opinion, this is exactly the kind of article that needs to be expanded and DYK should feature, so I hope you can get this one on the front page. |
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:* The Ogilvie and Rayner-Canham sources has a different transliteration of her name. Perhaps adding alternate transliterations or her name in cyrillic could boost the character count. |
:* The Ogilvie and Rayner-Canham sources has a different transliteration of her name. Perhaps adding alternate transliterations or her name in cyrillic could boost the character count. |
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:* The wording of the hook is awkward. Why not something simple like "chemist '''[[Vera Popova]]''' ''(pictured)'' was the first woman to die conducting scientific research?" |
:* The wording of the hook is awkward. Why not something simple like '''Alt2''' "... that chemist '''[[Vera Popova]]''' ''(pictured)'' was the first woman to die conducting scientific research?" |
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:* Hook source and picture check out. |
:* Hook source and picture check out. |
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:* Your hook source cites [https://www.dropbox.com/s/p6rkszm51mx2c59/vera.pdf this article] as its source for that info. I've uploaded it to dropbox in case it can help you add a few extra characters to the article. |
:* Your hook source cites [https://www.dropbox.com/s/p6rkszm51mx2c59/vera.pdf this article] as its source for that info. I've uploaded it to dropbox in case it can help you add a few extra characters to the article. |
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:I think you will find that it is compliant with the rules. Coincidentally I too your suggestion and created "Vera Bogdanovskaia" as main title. Cheers [[User:Victuallers|Victuallers]] ([[User talk:Victuallers|talk]]) 08:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC) |
:I think you will find that it is compliant with the rules. Coincidentally I too your suggestion and created "Vera Bogdanovskaia" as main title. Cheers [[User:Victuallers|Victuallers]] ([[User talk:Victuallers|talk]]) 08:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC) |
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:*Now article is expanded enough from 683 to 3880 readable characters, so passes expansion test. But I will let User:Gamaliel check the errors that were spotted. [[User:Graeme Bartlett|Graeme Bartlett]] ([[User talk:Graeme Bartlett|talk]]) 10:35, 25 April 2014 (UTC) |
:*Now article is expanded enough from 683 to 3880 readable characters, so passes expansion test. But I will let User:Gamaliel check the errors that were spotted. [[User:Graeme Bartlett|Graeme Bartlett]] ([[User talk:Graeme Bartlett|talk]]) 10:35, 25 April 2014 (UTC) |
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:Thanks GB - I removed the date from Alt1 as it is confusing and added "Alt2" as a label above. I think alt2 may not be supported by the cites as I think she was the first chemist to die. Alt2 implies she was the first female. |
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:Alt3 ... that '''[[Vera Bogdanovskaia]]''' (pictured) was the first woman chemist to die conducting scientific research? Cheers [[User:Victuallers|Victuallers]] ([[User talk:Victuallers|talk]]) 14:44, 26 April 2014 (UTC) |
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Revision as of 14:44, 26 April 2014
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Vera Popova (now Vera Bogdanovskaia)
- ... that the first female chemist (pictured) to die as a result of her work was trying to make H-C≡P?
- ALT1:... that Vera Bogdanovskaia (pictured) died in the laboratory her husband had given her as a wedding present?
- Reviewed: QPQ done - Irene Greif
5x expanded by Aciram and Victuallers (talk). Self nominated at 08:40, 22 April 2014 (UTC).
According to DYK check, the article is 342 characters short of being a x5 expansion. It's a shame because, in my opinion, this is exactly the kind of article that needs to be expanded and DYK should feature, so I hope you can get this one on the front page.
- The Ogilvie and Rayner-Canham sources has a different transliteration of her name. Perhaps adding alternate transliterations or her name in cyrillic could boost the character count.
- The wording of the hook is awkward. Why not something simple like Alt2 "... that chemist Vera Popova (pictured) was the first woman to die conducting scientific research?"
- Hook source and picture check out.
- Your hook source cites this article as its source for that info. I've uploaded it to dropbox in case it can help you add a few extra characters to the article.
- Your primary sources, Ogilvie and Rayner-Canham, list her under her maiden name. Should not the title of the Wikipedia article do so as well?
Gamaliel (talk) 21:36, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for your help. The article you sent and the mods you made to the article were very useful. I think the size has now grown and the quality has increased.
- I will add some different transliterations - good idea.
- Your hook is a good alt. although maybe not so intriguing?
- Maiden name? - could do.
- I think this addresses the major point. I'll look at the rest later. Cheers Victuallers (talk) 23:46, 22 April 2014 (UTC)
- Hi thanks for the review and the offer of help. Can you identify or correct the errors you have found please. I do value your suggestions but these are not part of the DYK review. I think you will find that it is compliant with the rules. Cheers Victuallers (talk) 16:34, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
- I think you will find that it is compliant with the rules. Coincidentally I too your suggestion and created "Vera Bogdanovskaia" as main title. Cheers Victuallers (talk) 08:25, 24 April 2014 (UTC)
- Now article is expanded enough from 683 to 3880 readable characters, so passes expansion test. But I will let User:Gamaliel check the errors that were spotted. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 10:35, 25 April 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks GB - I removed the date from Alt1 as it is confusing and added "Alt2" as a label above. I think alt2 may not be supported by the cites as I think she was the first chemist to die. Alt2 implies she was the first female.
- Alt3 ... that Vera Bogdanovskaia (pictured) was the first woman chemist to die conducting scientific research? Cheers Victuallers (talk) 14:44, 26 April 2014 (UTC)