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This looks good, but the second header should probably be just "Applications". Also, your title is formatted incorrectly as a header.Hagen76 (talk) 17:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Please add an introductory paragraph written for general audiences before the table of contents. The first figure is good, but the part about "Paint" should be moved out of the caption and into the source info. There needs to be two more figures and a data table, and some of the paragraphs are unfinished. Hagen76 (talk) 19:01, 3 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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 This looks good, but the second header should probably be just "Applications".  Also, your title is formatted incorrectly as a header.[[User:Hagen76|Hagen76]] ([[User talk:Hagen76|talk]]) 17:46, 7 May 2014 (UTC)
-The first figure is good, but the part about "Paint" should be moved out of the caption and into the source info.  There needs to be two more figures and a data table, and some of the paragraphs are unfinished.
+Please add an introductory paragraph written for general audiences before the table of contents.  The first figure is good, but the part about "Paint" should be moved out of the caption and into the source info.  There needs to be two more figures and a data table, and some of the paragraphs are unfinished.
 [[User:Hagen76|Hagen76]] ([[User talk:Hagen76|talk]]) 19:01, 3 June 2014 (UTC)