Talk:Goodbye Mr. Fish/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 15:10, 25 September 2014 (UTC)

Lead

• "short lists of episode highlights." --> "short lists of series highlights."
  • Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:50, 27 September 2014 (UTC)
• "highlights. Highlights of this episode" repeatitive, perhaps "Clips of..."?
  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:52, 27 September 2014 (UTC)

Plot

• "bathroom - not" em dash, please.
  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:54, 27 September 2014 (UTC)

Passing Cast.

• I believe you are saying the Cast section passes as is.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 00:55, 27 September 2014 (UTC)

Production

• You probably should say that "as of 1987," it was one of the few sitcom episodes to show a bathroom, as while it's not common, but certainly not as rare now.
  • Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 01:02, 27 September 2014 (UTC)

Reception

• Entirely irrelevant comment on my part, I find it amazing how Falcon Crest got #2 in that week's ratings, yet it has faded so much from the public conciousness.
  • Thanks for sharing.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:21, 27 September 2014 (UTC)
• The Ebony reference is fine as it is, but it likely would be included in Google Books' scans of the magazine.
  • Added a google books link.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:20, 27 September 2014 (UTC)
• "first 81 episodes"... until the reader reaches the "Looking Back" sentence, this number is just confusing.
  • Not sure what correction you request.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:24, 27 September 2014 (UTC)
• "—," is improper
  • not sure why, but changed to "),"--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:27, 27 September 2014 (UTC)
• The whole "Looking Back" sentence needs either more punctuation, or to be split into a couple sentences. There's 35 words or numbers before the first pause via punctuation.
  • Split.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:30, 27 September 2014 (UTC)
• While you've linked to Looking Back in the lead, link to it here, again.
  • Done.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:32, 27 September 2014 (UTC)
• Does the Turner Broadcasting System call themselves that on the page you link to? It's a safe bet that they call themselves TBS.

Passing References, External links, Categories, Infobox, image license. -- Zanimum (talk) 15:10, 25 September 2014 (UTC)