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== text to advertisement-like ==

Current language reads like an advertisement for the institution. Parts of it are written in the first person ("our" programs etc.) appears to have been self-sourced. Pardes is a well-known institution and it should be possible to obtain reliably-sourced material on it. [[Special:Contributions/69.126.2.102|69.126.2.102]] ([[User talk:69.126.2.102|talk]]) 02:30, 12 December 2014 (UTC)

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text to advertisement-like

Current language reads like an advertisement for the institution. Parts of it are written in the first person ("our" programs etc.) appears to have been self-sourced. Pardes is a well-known institution and it should be possible to obtain reliably-sourced material on it. 69.126.2.102 (talk) 02:30, 12 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]