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**Shinnyo-en is supposed to be esoteric. |
**Shinnyo-en is supposed to be esoteric. |
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**Go to your nearby Shinnyo-en temple and ask the gymi-koku (office-people): some Shinnyo-en publications are designed for the general public (example: the pamphlet "What is Shinnyo-en") and some publications should be given only to people who are connected (example: the Kangi-Seki). |
**Go to your nearby Shinnyo-en temple and ask the gymi-koku (office-people): some Shinnyo-en publications are designed for the general public (example: the pamphlet "What is Shinnyo-en") and some publications should be given only to people who are connected (example: the Kangi-Seki). |
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**It is my understanding that, according to Shinnyo-en policy, the pamphlet "What is Shinnyo-en" is the limit of |
**It is my understanding that, according to Shinnyo-en policy, the pamphlet "What is Shinnyo-en" is the limit of detail approved for the general public. |
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I intend to modify this article according to Wiki policy and Shinnyo-en policy. |
I intend to modify this article according to Wiki policy and Shinnyo-en policy. |
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Revision as of 00:47, 21 July 2006
bakkudaijo > bakkudaiju, Mahaparanirvana > Mahaparinirvana
Tiny corrections; from bakkudaij"o" to bakkudaij"u", and Mahapar"a"nirvana sutra to Mahapar"i"nirvana sutra. These are more accurate than the previous description. I forgot to leave these explanation when I posted on the discussion page on the other day.
Suggestions for improvement; intention to modify article
The article about Shinnyo-en can be modified and improved because:
- It is not verifiable
- It is not neutral
- It reveals too much detail about Shinnyo-en to the general public.
- Shinnyo-en is supposed to be esoteric.
- Go to your nearby Shinnyo-en temple and ask the gymi-koku (office-people): some Shinnyo-en publications are designed for the general public (example: the pamphlet "What is Shinnyo-en") and some publications should be given only to people who are connected (example: the Kangi-Seki).
- It is my understanding that, according to Shinnyo-en policy, the pamphlet "What is Shinnyo-en" is the limit of detail approved for the general public.
I intend to modify this article according to Wiki policy and Shinnyo-en policy.
--Danwri 20:58, 20 July 2006 (UTC)
Article modified
Article modified per intention explained above. Will be doing ongoing work on this article to bring in additional material from "What is Shinnyo-En", and from other verifiable, neutral, and approved publications.