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'''Proposal for my edit of the page [[Wanted poster|Wanted Poster]]'''

I believe there needs to be a drastic improvement to almost all aspects of this article. So far included in this article is a brief summary of what a wanted poster is, followed by a description of modern day wanted posters, electronic billboards. Later it expands upon the concept of bounties on wanted posters, the images used in wanted posters, and the idea of being wanted dead or alive. I believe this is where much of the revisions to this article must be made.
First I would suggest removing the section “Images” as it does not contribute to the article. The information in this section is not well explained or connected to the article, but could still be considered relevant and worth saving.
Second, very large parts of this article are either lacking greatly in information, or need to be completely rewritten. The sub sections “Dead or Alive” and “Bounty” are very short, and don't provide much to the article. I suggest rewriting these sections with greater detail, and giving some more examples or explanations of the ideas.
Finally some additions need to be made to this article. Most importantly, this article needs to increase the amount of references it uses for its information. Almost none of the information on this article is cited. Adding more references would both increase the credibility of this article, and perhaps provide some new information on the topic. There also needs to be added a section referencing the iconic wanted posters commonly depicted in western movies and TV.
'''Current annotated bibliography as of 3/6/2014'''

The following is a blog written by the Autry National Center, which is a museum in Los Angeles, California, dedicated to exploring an inclusive history of the American West. It provides a review of a wanted poster produced by the Pinkerton agency. They remark how actual wanted posters in the Wild West did not look like how we imagine them. Although this is not an exact inquiry into the history of the wanted poster, I believe it does provide information that would be useful in Wikipedia’s article about the wanted poster. Although this is published on the website of a prominent museum, it is still technically a blog. I think this article could be considered credible, but only after a bit of fact checking.
CORREIA, NICHOLAS X., and FRANCISCO A. RAMOS. "The Autry Blog." The Autry Blog. N.p., 4 Aug. 2014. Web. 04 Mar. 2015.

True west magazine writes a short article on a turning point in the history of wanted posters. Although it is short, it does provide a few relevant facts that would greatly improve Wikipedia’s article on Wanted Posters. Since this is a published and somewhat known magazine I would regard the information it prints to be credible.

Trimble, Marshall. "When Were Photos First Put on Wanted Posters?" True West Magazine. N.p., 10 June 2013. Web. 05 Mar. 2015.

The following in an article written by The British Library reviewing the wanted poster of Adolf Hitler. This wanted poster, produced by British creators depicted the german chancellor as a classic Wild West criminal, and was used as propaganda during the war. I think this could be relevant in providing not only more real life examples of wanted posters, but by providing more insight into how wanted posters have been used to influence the public. This article also touches on the recurrent use of the idea of a wanted poster by media sources, which is something not yet mentioned in the Wikipedia Article on wanted posters that i believe is relevant and should be included. This item is published on the website for The British Library, a very credible source for information of all kinds, and therefore i think it can be trusted.

"Wanted Poster for Hitler." Wanted Poster for Hitler. The British Library, n.d. Web. 06 Mar. 2015.

Revision as of 14:14, 6 March 2015


Proposal for my edit of the page Wanted Poster

I believe there needs to be a drastic improvement to almost all aspects of this article. So far included in this article is a brief summary of what a wanted poster is, followed by a description of modern day wanted posters, electronic billboards. Later it expands upon the concept of bounties on wanted posters, the images used in wanted posters, and the idea of being wanted dead or alive. I believe this is where much of the revisions to this article must be made. First I would suggest removing the section “Images” as it does not contribute to the article. The information in this section is not well explained or connected to the article, but could still be considered relevant and worth saving. Second, very large parts of this article are either lacking greatly in information, or need to be completely rewritten. The sub sections “Dead or Alive” and “Bounty” are very short, and don't provide much to the article. I suggest rewriting these sections with greater detail, and giving some more examples or explanations of the ideas. Finally some additions need to be made to this article. Most importantly, this article needs to increase the amount of references it uses for its information. Almost none of the information on this article is cited. Adding more references would both increase the credibility of this article, and perhaps provide some new information on the topic. There also needs to be added a section referencing the iconic wanted posters commonly depicted in western movies and TV.

Current annotated bibliography as of 3/6/2014

The following is a blog written by the Autry National Center, which is a museum in Los Angeles, California, dedicated to exploring an inclusive history of the American West. It provides a review of a wanted poster produced by the Pinkerton agency. They remark how actual wanted posters in the Wild West did not look like how we imagine them. Although this is not an exact inquiry into the history of the wanted poster, I believe it does provide information that would be useful in Wikipedia’s article about the wanted poster. Although this is published on the website of a prominent museum, it is still technically a blog. I think this article could be considered credible, but only after a bit of fact checking.

CORREIA, NICHOLAS X., and FRANCISCO A. RAMOS. "The Autry Blog." The Autry Blog. N.p., 4 Aug. 2014. Web. 04 Mar. 2015.

True west magazine writes a short article on a turning point in the history of wanted posters. Although it is short, it does provide a few relevant facts that would greatly improve Wikipedia’s article on Wanted Posters. Since this is a published and somewhat known magazine I would regard the information it prints to be credible.

Trimble, Marshall. "When Were Photos First Put on Wanted Posters?" True West Magazine. N.p., 10 June 2013. Web. 05 Mar. 2015.

The following in an article written by The British Library reviewing the wanted poster of Adolf Hitler. This wanted poster, produced by British creators depicted the german chancellor as a classic Wild West criminal, and was used as propaganda during the war. I think this could be relevant in providing not only more real life examples of wanted posters, but by providing more insight into how wanted posters have been used to influence the public. This article also touches on the recurrent use of the idea of a wanted poster by media sources, which is something not yet mentioned in the Wikipedia Article on wanted posters that i believe is relevant and should be included. This item is published on the website for The British Library, a very credible source for information of all kinds, and therefore i think it can be trusted.

"Wanted Poster for Hitler." Wanted Poster for Hitler. The British Library, n.d. Web. 06 Mar. 2015.