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::Don't forget to make a section heading and sign (see [[WP:SIG]]) your comment. Also, add some context (e.g. these are potential article sources). --[[User:Kkmurray|Kkmurray]] ([[User talk:Kkmurray|talk]]) 22:11, 8 March 2015 (UTC) |
::Don't forget to make a section heading and sign (see [[WP:SIG]]) your comment. Also, add some context (e.g. these are potential article sources). --[[User:Kkmurray|Kkmurray]] ([[User talk:Kkmurray|talk]]) 22:11, 8 March 2015 (UTC) |
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Hello Ben! At first glance you're article is excellent, it's extremely detailed and easy to read. I like that you added images, but is there any way to increase the size of them? They seem to be overshadowed by the wordiness of the article. We want readers to be able to look over and see all of the detail in the images and connect that to what you're conveying in the article. Also, I would suggest that you go back through the article once more because I noticed several grammar errors, but those shouldn't take much to correct. Moreover, I noticed that in alot of the sections only one of several sentences has a citation, so are you suggesting that the other information is common knowledge? I say this because you give a lot of background about people that had key involvement in the development of certain aspects of the aerosol mass spectrometry, but I don't see a citation for where you're getting this information. So I would suggest going back in and if you mention a certain person and his or her contribution to the topic (or anything else that the normal person wouldn't know), that you give some sort of reference immediately following the statement. [[User:MiaJ601|MiaJ601]] ([[User talk:MiaJ601|talk]]) 19:39, 15 April 2015 (UTC) |
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Bibliography
The following is a list of journal articles and some books that talk about aerosol mass spectrometry, I will be continually adding to this list and use them to edit the article. Please feel free to add to this list with any suggestions.
- Laskin, Alexander; Laskin, Julia; Nizkorodov, Sergey A. (2012). "Mass spectrometric approaches for chemical characterisation of atmospheric aerosols: critical review of the most recent advances". Environmental Chemistry. 9 (163). doi:10.1071/EN12052.
- Suess, David T.; Prather, Kimberly A. (1999). "Mass Spectrometry of Aerosols". Chemical reviews. 10 (99). doi:10.1021/cr980138o. ISSN 0009-2665.
- Jayne, John T.; Leard, Danna C.; Zhang (2000). "Development of an Aersol Mass Spectrometer for Size and Composition Analysis of Submicron Particles". Aerosol Science and Technology. 33. doi:10.1080/027868200410840.
{{cite journal}}: Text "http://dx.doi.org/10.1080/027868200410840" ignored (help) - Nash, David G.; Baer, Tomas; Johnston, Murray V. (2006). "Aerosol mass spectrometry: An introductory review". International Journal of Mass Spectrometry. 258 (1–3): 2–12. doi:10.1016/j.ijms.2006.09.017. ISSN 1387-3806.
- Pratt, Kerri A.; Prather, Kimberly A. (2012). "Mass spectrometry of atmospheric aerosols-Recent developments and applications. Part I: Off-line mass spectrometry techniques". Mass Spectrometry Reviews. 31 (1): 1–16. doi:10.1002/mas.20322. ISSN 0277-7037.
- Pratt, Kerri A.; Prather, Kimberly A. (2012). "Mass spectrometry of atmospheric aerosols-Recent developments and applications. Part II: On-line mass spectrometry techniques". Mass Spectrometry Reviews. 31 (1): 17–48. doi:10.1002/mas.20330. ISSN 0277-7037.
- DeCarlo, Peter F.; Kimmel, Joel R. (2006). "Field-Deployable, High-Resolution, Time-of-Flight Aerosol Mass Spectrometery". Analytical Chemistry. 78 (24): 8281–8289. doi:10.1021/ac061249n. ISSN 0003-2700.
- Canagartna, M.R.; Jayne, J.T. (2007). "Chemical and microphysical characterization of ambient aerosols with the aerodyne aersol mass spectrometer". Mass Spectrometry Reviews. 26 (2): 185–222. doi:10.1002/mas.20115. ISSN 0277-7037.
- Jayne, John T.; Leard, Danna C.; Zhang, Xuefeng (2000). "Development of an aerosol mass spectrometer for size and composition analysis of submicron particles". Aerosol Science and Technology. 33 (1–2): 49–70. doi:10.1080/027868200410840. ISSN 0278-6826.
- Aiken, Allison C.; Decarlo, Peter F.; Kroll, Jesse H. (2008). "O/C and OM/OC Ratios of Primary, Secondary, and Ambient Organic Aerosols with High-Resolution Time-of-Flight Aerosol Mass Spectrometry". Environmental Science & Technology. 42 (12): 4478–4485. doi:10.1021/es703009q. ISSN 0013-936X.
{{cite journal}}: zero width space character in|title=at position 2 (help) - Heringa, M. F.; DeCarlo, Peter F.; Chirico, R. (2011). "Investigations of primary and secondary particulate matter of different wood combustion appliances with a high-resolution time-of-flight aerosol mass spectrometer". Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics (11): 5945–5957. doi:10.5194/acp-ll-5945-2011.
{{cite journal}}: CS1 maint: unflagged free DOI (link) - Drewnick, Frank; Hings, Silke S.; DeCarlo, Peter (2005). "A New Time-of-Flight Aerosol Mass Spectrometer (TOF-AMS)—Instrument Description and First Field Deployment". Environmental Science & Technology. 39 (7): 637–658. doi:10.1080/02786820500182040.
- Jimenez, Jose L.; Jayne, John T.; Shi, Quan (2001). "Ambient aerosol sampling using the Aerodyne Aerosol Mass Spectrometer". JOURNAL OF GEOPHYSICAL RESEARCH. 108 (7): 8425. doi:10.1029/2001JD001213.
Benjamin Haywood (talk) 18:35, 9 March 2015 (UTC)
- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Benjamin Haywood (talk • contribs) 16:18, March 8, 2015
- Don't forget to make a section heading and sign (see WP:SIG) your comment. Also, add some context (e.g. these are potential article sources). --Kkmurray (talk) 22:11, 8 March 2015 (UTC)
Hello Ben! At first glance you're article is excellent, it's extremely detailed and easy to read. I like that you added images, but is there any way to increase the size of them? They seem to be overshadowed by the wordiness of the article. We want readers to be able to look over and see all of the detail in the images and connect that to what you're conveying in the article. Also, I would suggest that you go back through the article once more because I noticed several grammar errors, but those shouldn't take much to correct. Moreover, I noticed that in alot of the sections only one of several sentences has a citation, so are you suggesting that the other information is common knowledge? I say this because you give a lot of background about people that had key involvement in the development of certain aspects of the aerosol mass spectrometry, but I don't see a citation for where you're getting this information. So I would suggest going back in and if you mention a certain person and his or her contribution to the topic (or anything else that the normal person wouldn't know), that you give some sort of reference immediately following the statement. MiaJ601 (talk) 19:39, 15 April 2015 (UTC)