Talk:All Nippon Airways/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MrWooHoo (talk · contribs) 01:18, 17 April 2015 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this excellent article! I do my GA reviews with one main review then with prose and source reviews to make sure the article is suitable for GA status! Example: This GA --Cheers! Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon! 01:18, 17 April 2015 (UTC)

Main Review

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	More will be covered in the prose review. From a glance it looks okay.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	Lead is a good length, good layout, no weasel words, etc.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	All/most information is properly cited, however, according to this page ..."citations are also often discouraged in the lead section of an article, insofar as it summarizes information for which sources are given later in the article..."
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	Citations are good, no citations would be considered challengable.
	2c. it contains no original research.	Will check this in the source review
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	Doesn't go into too much detail on anything specifically, it is covering the main aspects of ANA.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	Good article size, good lead like I mentioned earlier.
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.	Not biased because it is an airline article anyways.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	No edit wars, conflict wars, etc. Good job!
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.	may have an issue as the Pokemon themselves are copyright? You may have to remove this picture from the article. All other pictures are great!
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.	The pictures are relevant to ANA and they are described correctly.
	7. Overall assessment.	See comments above in the "copyright status" and "references" rows. Also, see below for prose and source reviews.

Prose Review

When you finish a point, just use a check sign which looks like this: Y Otherwise, use Y if it only partially is needed, or N if you don't think its necessary.