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*For an article with as many mentions of architectural awards it is surprising how little description is given to the structure's architecture. The article lists a handful of features (the existence of luxury suites, location of the bull pens, and location of a pool) but fails to include a description of the overall style or theme of the ballpark (does the ballpark have a retro theme, futuristic styling, ...?). There also needs to be a mention of what other types of events are held besides baseball games. --''[[User: Allen3|Allen3]]'' <sup>[[User talk:Allen3|talk]]</sup> 16:16, 31 July 2006 (UTC) |
*For an article with as many mentions of architectural awards it is surprising how little description is given to the structure's architecture. The article lists a handful of features (the existence of luxury suites, location of the bull pens, and location of a pool) but fails to include a description of the overall style or theme of the ballpark (does the ballpark have a retro theme, futuristic styling, ...?). There also needs to be a mention of what other types of events are held besides baseball games. --''[[User: Allen3|Allen3]]'' <sup>[[User talk:Allen3|talk]]</sup> 16:16, 31 July 2006 (UTC) |
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:*I am still working on getting a picture of the stadium, so that will make the architectural description easier. There are several architecture descriptions online that can be well used ("park within a park", etc.). In close proximity to the stadium is [[Pizza Hut Park]], which is where all of the concert type events seem to go on in Frisco because it has a built in concert stage. Like most baseball seasons, it is used almost every day during the season, and the offseason is winter, so an outdoor venue is less usable. It seems as though it is used for the Texas Amateur Athletic Federation's Winter Games, patterned after the Olympics for amateur athletes. I'll get to adding these things, including taking the picture. — [[User:Scm83x|Scm83x]] <sup>[[User talk:Scm83x|hook 'em]]</sup> 16:39, 31 July 2006 (UTC) |
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Revision as of 16:39, 31 July 2006
This article concerning a minor league ballpark in Texas recently became a good article. I have found little regarding what a stadium article should be in order to become featured, and I was hoping that this peer review could help me to gain more perspective on the article (as all peer reviews do). I anxiously await any input and thank you in advance for your aid. — Scm83x hook 'em 22:26, 30 July 2006 (UTC)
- For an article with as many mentions of architectural awards it is surprising how little description is given to the structure's architecture. The article lists a handful of features (the existence of luxury suites, location of the bull pens, and location of a pool) but fails to include a description of the overall style or theme of the ballpark (does the ballpark have a retro theme, futuristic styling, ...?). There also needs to be a mention of what other types of events are held besides baseball games. --Allen3 talk 16:16, 31 July 2006 (UTC)
- I am still working on getting a picture of the stadium, so that will make the architectural description easier. There are several architecture descriptions online that can be well used ("park within a park", etc.). In close proximity to the stadium is Pizza Hut Park, which is where all of the concert type events seem to go on in Frisco because it has a built in concert stage. Like most baseball seasons, it is used almost every day during the season, and the offseason is winter, so an outdoor venue is less usable. It seems as though it is used for the Texas Amateur Athletic Federation's Winter Games, patterned after the Olympics for amateur athletes. I'll get to adding these things, including taking the picture. — Scm83x hook 'em 16:39, 31 July 2006 (UTC)